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Reviews For: Darkness Overtaking

The Shang Kudarung
2008-02-05
ch 6,
abuseso...sweet...

the ending wasn't that good, tho.

onto story favs
Wasabikitty(logged out)
2008-02-03
ch 6, anon.
abuseIt made me cry. *Sniffles* Beautifully done, very poignant!

WK
Touquie
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseGood job
oOKayleeOo
2007-10-26
ch 5,
abusetouching and bitter sweet. nice.
Cassie
2007-08-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseits so sad!
Cassie
2007-08-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhy cant Cassie die?
Amethyst Asheryn
2007-06-07
ch 6,
abuseIs that the end? :'( *tear* Cassie died! It's not like Cassie, but like I've said (time and time and time again..) I guess war can do that to people. I like this. :)
Michieru Berujironu
2007-06-05
ch 6,
abuseWell, I have to admit, this is a very touching trdgedy. I'm shocked, really, really shocked.
Emily: :( Poor girl :(
Solmanic: She commited suicide, so why did she see the light? Anyone who kills themselves, regardless of reason or what they've done, will go to Hell because it is written...
Oh shut it Solmanic, no one wants to hear that, especially not the author, she wants to hear praise.
Solmanic: I'm just saying...
Renia: Shut it knighty
Solmanic:
Fathom for Kakashi
2007-05-20
ch 6,
abuseWow. So beautifully written. So sad. I might cry now.

May your sword or tail blade stay sharp.

Fathom.

PM me when there's more
Pharrells Girl
2007-05-10
ch 1,
abuseNow she, THIS is original. Sure, it might not be how it happened, but this IS Please continue!

-Pharrell's Girl
lizzie
2007-05-07
ch 3, anon.
abusecool poem thats sort of like wat we r doing in class :)
buh bye
Amethyst Asheryn
2007-05-06
ch 3,
abuseCassie stopped fighting? :'( Wow. She seemed to me to be the one who always kept everyone else fighting. But now, reading this, it looks like they were the ones keeping HER going. Although I guess that's the same for all of them, kind of close together as they were...:'( Love it!
Amethyst Asheryn
2007-05-06
ch 2,
abusePoor Cassie! Especially with her being the only one left, and all...(that was horribly unhelpful. Sorry.) I'll go read the next installment -thing now...Poor Cass...:'(
Sinister Shadow
2007-05-06
ch 3,
abuseIt's very creative, but you know this isn't how it really happened right? Still, keep going. It's interesting.
Akinasori14
2007-05-05
ch 1,
abuseumm...since ur kinda new i'm gonna spare u my random-ness-ish words and pity u. (evil smile) anywho just to give u pointers, i suggest that if you want Cassie to fall into a deep depression you would want her to be her own self but with more unbearable anguish. the reason y i'm telling u this is 'cause UR Cassie seems more like its been any other mission, like if her friends DID'NT die, u get my directionism?
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