Reviews for The Undercover Mission

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Lily887787 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abusewhat about tai?
Scentomon 2007-06-23 ch 14,	abuseHey. I really enjoyed this story of yours. Great job on finishing it. Nice thought of having Kari being with new parents and a spy. - Ammaar Al-Jallad
TsubasaBeauty17 2007-06-16 ch 14,	abuseFirst off, the chapters were... short. The longest chapter was the dance thing, but that was still short. Second, it needs more detail. I mean, they caught the suspect of the haunting thing, but it was too soon and the 'interview' was too short! Then there's the connection with the summary. You said 'Will she also fall in love with him?' but there was no difficulty in their relationship. And then there's the gasping thing and the laughing of 'Nicki' at the school dance and the 'Aww...' thing when the two of them were hugging seems a little... odd. I mean, they could have just been best friends and hugged because of a really happy event. And there's nothing wrong with holding hands either. Why did she laugh anyway? And also, I thought Takeru's mom didn't want him to have a girlfriend yet? Then why did she accept Hikari in her house? And why didn't 'Nikita' say something like 'Yay!' when she found out that Hikari was pregnant? And why was their music class cancelled? It leaves me confused at most parts. But putting those aside, it was good. I didn't mean to sound... mean, or something. I just wanted to tell you what I thought. I hope this doesn't seem too much like a flame! I really liked it, you know! I just... never mind. I hope you keep those in mind when you start the sequel!
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-06-09 ch 14,	abuseHm, strange ending, but then again you mentioned a sequel. I can't wait. Be sure that I will be reading it. I wonder what their marks mean.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-06-09 ch 13,	abuseAw, how sweet. I like the names. What do the marks mean? I hope it's nothing bad. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-06-09 ch 12,	abuseWell those are some ways of taking the news. I liked it. Please update.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-06-08 ch 11,	abuseOh wow. That was awesome. i can't believe that Kari is pregnate! Please update soon. TK and Kari forever!
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-26 ch 10,	abuseOh wow. That was fast. It was a short and sweet. I liked it alot. Kari and TK forever.
Lord Pata 2007-05-21 ch 10,	abusewonder what the surprise will be? this is really good ^^
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-18 ch 9,	abuseHahahaha! What a funny ending! this was a good story though. Please write more soon.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-17 ch 8,	abuseHA! This is getting really funny. Sorry, but i think that it's getting a tad bit corny and really short. I mean. . .whatever. Don't listen to me. This is fanfiction world! Anything can happen. Please update soon
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-15 ch 7,	abuseOh yeah! Things are moving along quickly aren't they? This was a good update. Please update soon! Kari and TK forever.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-13 ch 6,	abuseLOL! Hahahaha! I'm sorry, but this is getting really cornish. I like it though. Please update. I wonder if TK is going to be put in danger.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-13 ch 5,	abuseHahahaha! sorry. This was a little corny for my taste. I like it alot though. Please update. I think it's awesome.
Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-05-13 ch 4,	abuseLOL! A date! Oh yeah! Oh no! Kari isn't thinking of telling him the TRUTH-TRUTH is she? What is she thinking? This could put him in danger. Oh great. I can't wait. Please update soon.

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