uh disregard my last review.

led zepplin didn't exist

I just read all of this in two sittings. I'm sorry I don't check with fanfiction like I should most of my brokeback addiction I fulfill at livejournal.

I have to say this was a powerful story and you are excellent in your writing style and you grabbed me and held me on through the end. I am looking forward to reading more and biting the bit here that I have to actually leave at this moment.

The trials and tribulations of this story touched so many emotions and feelings and it also helped out with my own problems in life. I hope that you continue to write and give the world your gift it is a very special gift that you should be proud of.

Joe

This story really impressed me. I don't believe that I have ever read a story this long before that had so many grammatical and punctuation errors. Once again, I am very impressed. I loved seeing your writing and your characters grow, and I can't wait to get started on your sequel.

This story is original, mostly believable, fun, entertaining, relateable, and just all-around outstanding.

Thanks for a fantastic read.

I'm just catching up on this site after a few months away, and I came across the last few chapters of this wonderful story that I have missed.
I'm so happy that Jess is finally going to accept Ennis. I guess all it took was that trip to New York, and down memory lane for him to bring him to his senses.
I hope their happiness lasts.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

Well, for the past three or four days I have done nothing but sit at this computer reading this story. It was amazing. I cried at just about every chapter and couldn't wait to get tot he end. So finally, here I am, having finally finished it. All I have to say is Congratulations. It was a fantastic story.

Wow..I need more. When I first sat down to read this fic, I was like "Jesse...whos that?" But I can't believe how well you pulled it off. Personalities, traits, all seemed to match perfectly with my perception of the characters.

I just read your entire story in one time and i just have to say how amazing I thought it was.!! I absolutely loved it and the ending was just perfect.!!

Thank you. It was a wonderful story with the a great ending. Great writing!

Found "WWOL" several months ago and fell in love with it. Granted, I'd *like* to see how Jess further aclimates to life in Shattuck... but you have brought this to a logical -- and BEAUTIFUL -- conclusion! Thank you!

Jon

Awesome chapter! Please update soon, I'm excited to see what happens with Ennis and Jess going their separate ways for a day. I love all your little references to the future, too, like the thing about Paris Hilton :)

Can't wait... can't wait for more!
How can this get any better!
Thank's so much for this story, just beautiful!

Great chapter, I'm really looking forward to more of NY!

I think it's great for Ennis to see the world Jess grew up in anh how it is so different from his own. great chapter, being a native new yorker i can appreciate the sights.

I do enjoy this story, great chapter! I particularly liked Jess's comment about Bobby with a hooker :) I can't wait for the next chapter, so please, please, please update soon!