AH! Famazing! You have to do a sequel~ =)

Oh? interesting beginning! =)

GREAT STORY! =D Stunning, spectacular! I think I'll eventually reread it! =)

I know this is my first time Reviewing your story, and I'm sorry it has taken that long. lol...
Firstly, I'd like to say I absolutely adore the story. =) It's just so captivating!
Secondly, it's unique, and you don't find a lot of unique things anymore.
Thirdly, this you may not have known, but since it's 2 days after Harry and them left to Hogwarts, it's now the 3rd of September, and there are only 30 days in September. I would know, my birthday is the 28th. lol Just one small error that I spotted.

I really love this story, and I forced myself to go to sleep at about 2 in the morning today before I stayed up all night to finish it... =) Thank you for your awesome writing!

Nicely done! I enjoyed it, but I would have liked to read more of the development of Bil's relationship with his new family!

My god, i loved it so much! I love the whole Bill/Oc pairing and how James was in there made the story excellent. Your a talented writer too.

Bill Weasley is quickly becoming my top hero, and this fic is a pretty part of it. I love your writting, how you flesh people out and make them real, how you portrayed characters that everyone is familiar with, and some we aren't, and made them real and have them find a special place in our hearts. I loved this fic immensley while I read it and couldn't stop reading. Thank you for writting this, and I can't wait to read more of your works.

This really is an amazing story.

james sounds like my little brother in the morning =] come to think of it, sounds like me too lol
I think you portray Bill's character pretty well considering how little time he is in the book.

i read about pyramids somewhere, watching 'The Mummy' makes it more realistic though, ;D

awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one!

xx shadow xx

is the 'Sow' in the title supposed to be 'cow'? if not whats a Sow?

great chapter

awesome, james is so cute =]

cant wait for the next chapter

xx shadow xx

totally awesome chapter ^^ thats all i have to say.

xx shadow xx

Im pretty sure percy has a faulty Weasley gene. All his brothers and sister turned out just fine. and i decided i didnt like him at all when i read his name in the first trio of books. what a snob!

awesome ^^

not percy, the story so far ^^

xx shadow xx

Story: 8.75/10. I really like the idea and I think that the fic in general flows well. At first, I was a little afraid that this would read too much like original fiction, but your detailed writing about the Weasley family has made sure that this does not happen.

Characters: 8/10. I think that you've managed to make most the characters very in character and interesting. You've captured Mrs. Weasley well and I like your Charlie. I do think that you've made Percy a little too much of a git and James is maybe a little too cute.

Creativity: 8.25/10. I think that it is a really interesting situation to put this character in, though the basic plot idea is, of course, not unheard of.

Writing: 8.5/10. You write fairly well with adequate description, though I don't find your style particularly beautiful.

Believability/AU: 7.75/10. The basic storyline is believable, but there are several little things that niggled at me throughout the fic. For example, why does Mrs. Weasley basically ground Bill? He is a grown man with a job and a kid, he can't be grounded. And it seemed pretty weird to me that Bill had a Lord of the Rings tattoo in the first chapter.

Overall: 8.25/10. Very cute fic, I like the idea and you write well. A few of your characterizations strike me as a bit off and there are a few little things that bother me.

Professionalism: B. I think that your summary could be more descriptive, but good job, overall.

*tear*