Great job! I loved the way you showed Raph and Don interacting throughout the whole thing. You know I've toyed with the idea of giving Leo diabetes, but never actually got it presentable, looks like you beat me to the punch^^

I love it. I was gettingso sad when i thought he might have that tumor.Awesome.

This story is so cool, I love it. I think you could have gotten away with it as a one shot but am SO GLAD you chose not to because I loved the second chapter as well! I remember when I was had to have a biopsy done from some mole the doctor I worked for removed. I didn't have any idea it was so serious, man, my parents hit the roof when I told them about it and for some reason seemed convinced I had cancer since it does run in the family. I kept insisting it was nothing and guess what? It was nothing. Kinda like does my family WANT me to have cancer or something? ANYWAY sorry rambling.

I loved the Don and Raph interaction, it was awesome, all of it! I really loved the Cut Scenes, those were really awesome and so much fun to read! Especially liked the one with Raph and Mikey watching TV and Splinter with his very parental sighing. Ah, you do have to wonder if they would've been better or worse off with a different leader? Raph could've basically forced them to do whatever and Mikey probably would've had them eating pizzas til they resembled the people from WALL*E. Or maybe it would've been better. Either way, it's hard to adjust to changes like that. Two years is a long time. Well, in your teen years it is, anyway.

Sorry, I am just rambling about different topics, I hope you like reading ridiculously long reviews. I don't feel like I've complimented you enough on your amazing writing abilities and I'm not sure I can find any other words to really convey how much I enjoyed reading this fic so thank you for taking the time and effort to post this up for us.

Yay Donny lives! I was hoping TwT I'd cry for weeks if he did. Well done though! The details and of course the fact you used correct prognoses(sp?)and side-effects was impressive! It means you did your homework. Well done! *claps*

damn good for Raph. honestly, cringing at stealing in a case like this? gimme a break. if there's nothing in the world you love more than your own beliefs or morals...well, that's pretty damn pathetic.

I really love this fic. It's got some of the best Raph/Don interaction I've ever seen. I especially love those deleted scenes. Best line ever: "But before Raph could even start to consider panicking..." Heck, I've read this story like 6 times and it doesn't get old at all. Even though Leo can kind of come across as a huge jerk towards the end of it.

I think you're right to have left the real ending where it is. But I do love scene 5. That could have been a wonderful ending as well. The only problem with this lovely fic was that it was so short.

Oh this was just as good as the first part! I'm so thrilled that Donnie doesn't have cancer and isn't going to die! And, yay, he's bonding with Raph and got his skateboard back. Although, yes, it's a bad idea to have Mikey be the owner of a jet-powered something.

First off, I loved how Raph thought of Donnie skateboarding and then Leo came in with the same line Don said after he finished skateboarding in the first movie. That was wonderful! But now then, this fic, is so touching! Seriously, I love how you have it focused on Don and Raph. Those two have the sweetest interactions when something horrible, like cancer, happens.

What an awesome look at the relationships between the brothers!

This was such a cool glimpse at the brothers' relationships. It was a really thoughtful story.

This was adorable, in a down-right perfect way.

I'm in awe!

Wonderful story! I like seeing the soft guy underneath Raph's tough guy act. Also, it's good to see Don and Raph seeing past their differences. Thanks for sharing!

These little snippets/deleted scenes were really good and entertaining. I felt like crying at the first scene when Don forgets where he is and I also went "aww" at the cute little chat between Ralph and Mikey. I really enjoyed reading this and simply thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this. You did an amazing job on this.

Yay! Donnie doesn't have cancer! He's going to be all right with lots of rest and medication! More lovely brotherly love between Don and Ralph. And of course, love the little skateboard scene with Mikey. ^^

//“Anyways, as I was saying, it fits pretty well. When I thought you was on death’s door, I got all geared up to do the big hero thing.” He rolled his eyes, evidently a bit embarrassed, and smiled in self-mockery. “Y’know, steal medical supplies for you, kidnap a doctor or two, stuff like that. And in battle, I’d jump in front of a bullet for ya without a single regret. For any of you.”//

My respect and love for Ralph just shot up like a thousand more notches. I just love those two.