CutyNess!

aww so cute i luv it *goes to read other stories*

CUTE! Is all I can really say!

aw its so sweet! i liked it!

This is a very good story! Your very good at making Shadamy fluffs.

That was so adorable! -^.^-

I loved how you wrote it out and how you managed to make it adorable while keeping them in-character. ^^

I agree with what you said. People due tend to change in relationships(in this case, for the better), espicially when they have a child. You executed that quit well in here. :]

-sigh- If only Shadow/Amy we're to really happen. I would love to see a Shadow like this. >w<

Wonderful story! Keep up the lovely work!

aww! That was so cute! Little alexis sounds really cute! And I think you're right, when people have kids, it makes them change. Even daddy Shadow!

Aw... I love these fics, they almost make me want to cry... but I don't really cry when it comes to these things so ya. Anyway, really cute! Make once when she's like, two or five or something and then skip to when she's a teenager! I sense hilarity on the horizan!

Whilst it's hard to understand your grammar for most of this story, it is still readable. It's an adorable little ficlet, and so cute :)

Well done.

*sighs* that was just so cute, I love it, love it, love it!

How suggestive! This was packed with a cute style of writing, and Sonic getting the crap beaten out of him! (Heh.)

However, you do have a little trouble with possesive nouns and past tenses. Like, when a mother is showing ownership to her child (or whatever), place "'s" after "mother."

"Seeing her asleep like this, make it all worth while to wait all of those years..."

The word "make" should have been in past tense, thus writing it as, "made."

I hope I helped you a little bit with grammar. Good luck with your future stories! I'll be reading them, obviously.

~Raicho Hachirobei

Awh! That was so sweet! X3
Brilliant, 5* story. Alexis sounds so cute! X3
Friendly advice:
- Watch the tenses.

I totally agree that Shadow would change if he got together with Amy. Her personality would be intoxicating to him. X3 And I think a child would just be the icing on the cake; as it were. But I do think the degree in which Shadow would change depends on the gender of the child... *nods* X3
Well I'm done rambling. XD
5* story!

This was really sweet, and I enjoyed seeing Shadow get all soft around his family!