Whoa! My first NnanshiAlviss I think! Not a big fan of yaoi but its okay sometimes...I think you did a great job on this!

NICE!

Oh, and if you got a reply from a person named haha THAT'S ME! Here's my real pen name. Please keep writing MAR fanfics!

nice, very Alviss like thoughts too! this isn't a big pairing in this fandom...shame

aw! i love this pairing! dunno why...

it just seems so much better than phantom/alviss or alviss/ginta...

anyways! hope you write more this was really good!

Me: I wonder who is the most popular pairing for Alviss.

Aussa: It's either AlvissxNanashi or PhantomxAlviss.

Me: HEY! YOU FORGOT GintaxAlviss!

Aussa: But that pairing isn't as popular as...

Me: THERE'S LIKE *Counting fingers* 5 GintaxAlviss fstories on this site! With my Falling for the First Time the longest.

Aussa:...PhantomxAlviss has at least 15 and NanashixAlviss has more 5, I think 7.

Me: I WON'T LET THAT HAPPEN! I WILL WRITE MORE GINTAXALVISS STORIES UNTIL THEY OVERCOME PHANTOMXALVISS AND ALVISSXNANASHI STORIES COMBINED!

Yohko: Good luck.

Definitely the best MÄR fanfic in this place. It's beautifuly writen, really. Very soft and subtle, the pace is perfect! Not OOC at all, actually Alviss thoughts are very IC. I like specially the thoughts about why it "can't be" and the realization at the end that it is. You put their relationship in a lovely way. Bittersweet and angsty, exactely how I like it! A favorite, for sure! Can't wait to see any other MÄR fanfics by you. Do I have the hope to see any other couples? Wich ones do you like? Oh, ok, this is a review, not a chat...

Congrats again!

That's a really sweet fic. I like it alot, and the characters aren't OOC, they're actually pretty in character in my point of view!