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The Last Kitten
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
O_O Wow...I'll second Autumn S's comment! ^u^ Great Job!
Matamis
2007-05-09 . chapter 1
^__^ Love the angst stuff these are the kind of stories im lookin for!
AineSparrow
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
EXCELLENT job... I was wondering what happened when Hiro/Ando teleported out of there.

Your story ties into the episode quite nicely... kudos for keeping Mohinder/Sylar in character *hands you cookies* The way you laid this out, I could see this happening on the show (if they chose to do a webisode or extended scene at the end)

[Suddenly, his body jerks violently and there’s something insanely warm wrapped around him. Mohinder’s hands immediately go to his middle and he encounters interlocked hands.

“I was hoping you wouldn’t do that,” Sylar growls in his ear. “But… I should’ve known. You. You are such a fucking martyr! But you know what?”

What?

“I love it.”

Sylar licks his ear and bites his neck.

Mohinder can only moan. It’s so wrong and yet, so, so, so good. ] - This is gonna be a twisted relationship lol ;-)

Once again, well done :) *waves* Take care!

TL
P.S. Sorry if this review sucks... was it just me or did their seem to be slashy hints for Hiro/Ando in that ep? (or am I going crazy? hehe)

Oh, would you take a fic challenge? This idea popped into my head but I'm not a writer...
Jessamyn Dreamer
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
I've been *dying* to know what happened in the alternate future to poor Mohinder - I'm so glad someone besides me cared enough.
songintheair
2007-05-06 . chapter 1
I love it! It was SO well written and the story itself was so intense and fascinating, I was actually sad when I reached the end! Way to go!
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