 AineSparrow 2007-05-08 . chapter 1EXCELLENT job... I was wondering what happened when Hiro/Ando teleported out of there.
Your story ties into the episode quite nicely... kudos for keeping Mohinder/Sylar in character *hands you cookies* The way you laid this out, I could see this happening on the show (if they chose to do a webisode or extended scene at the end)
[Suddenly, his body jerks violently and there’s something insanely warm wrapped around him. Mohinder’s hands immediately go to his middle and he encounters interlocked hands.
“I was hoping you wouldn’t do that,” Sylar growls in his ear. “But… I should’ve known. You. You are such a fucking martyr! But you know what?”
What?
“I love it.”
Sylar licks his ear and bites his neck.
Mohinder can only moan. It’s so wrong and yet, so, so, so good. ] - This is gonna be a twisted relationship lol ;-)
Once again, well done :) *waves* Take care!
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P.S. Sorry if this review sucks... was it just me or did their seem to be slashy hints for Hiro/Ando in that ep? (or am I going crazy? hehe)
Oh, would you take a fic challenge? This idea popped into my head but I'm not a writer... |