| Reviews for Pretty when you cry |
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PotterHarry Potter 8/23/11 . chapter 1 WHATTT? Harry cant just leave that! Jjjdhfysvdudvdu . . ...lol jk this was wonderfully written, i dont think ive cried so hard..PLEASE UPDATE |
Tsu-chan Yagami 10/17/10 . chapter 1pleaaase continue this...I cried while I was reading it...It has to have a clear ending please...Anyway here's your cookie and...yea I forgot: good job- |
arte0135 10/1/10 . chapter 1Great story!You should really consider doing a sequel,but I would be really disappointed if Draco did accept Harry back. Honestly after what happened, Draco should move on because no matter how much you love someone,love is not enough. Harry crossed a line and did not did not apologize or stop. Draco mentions that he was aware and wanted to apologize, but he didn't; he continued to do what was wrong and than comes back and acts like it is nothing. Like Draco said: it is too late to go back to the life they had. I really love Drarry stories, but sometimes the authors write situations where Harry hurts Draco to such a horrible extend, but never Harry really does anything to prove that he really loves than Draco takes him back and at times leaves a great guy that really loves him. Please, don't write anything like that, if you do decide to do a sequel. May be write about Draco getting better and moving on with his life and finding happiness; may be he can confront Harry and tell him that "it's too late to apologize". Harry knew he was sick and yet didn't make an effort to get better and he hurt the person that really loves; may be add that detail and how he regrets it. |
Brightfacade 5/24/07 . chapter 1I loved that story and I hope you write a sequel It was great! |
yaeko 5/17/07 . chapter 1hm so harry is hjust gonna walk away? is there something else? |
Albiku 5/13/07 . chapter 1No, you must continue this fic! You cant end it here, you just cant! I want to know what happened to Harry that changed him like that, and I want Draco to open the door! Please! lol See you! |
Wykked As Syn 5/9/07 . chapter 1Interesting. I think you should continue it. Though. I noticed about four lines from songs from Hoobastank and Three Days Grace in your story. Aside from that, keep up the good work. - Wykked As Syn |
fifespice 5/8/07 . chapter 1that was so sad why did harry treat draoc that way? |
FatalXLove 5/7/07 . chapter 1Your a very good writer, I've read some really bad things on here but yours is one of the best. You should definitely continue this story. Awesome Job . |
Kasiuke 5/7/07 . chapter 1 Oh, please do continue! |
Raphaela-San 5/7/07 . chapter 1Hy! Wow... it's... what should I say? Good? Perfect? Pretty awesome? It's really hard to explain what I feel while reading it how my breath goes a bit faster with every word and how I just want to kill Harry for being the fucking bastard he is... On the other hand I admire Draco for closing the door! I really don't know if I'd be able to do that if I was him... but I'm sure it was the right thing to do... Well.. all that's left to say now... I WANT THIS TO GO ON! GIVE ME MORE CHAPS!... and a happy end by the way... Would you do that for me? Well...I'd be delighted . And If you don't want... I won't bite you head off either... So THANK YOU! for writing this... I love your sadism and just can't get enough of it... love you bye bye yours Raphaela |
Craxy 5/7/07 . chapter 1You just HAVE to make a sequel! This is a must see! :D |
HaliaStar 5/6/07 . chapter 1You so have to continue, that was really really good & im nt jst saying that. keep up the good work :):D |
PotterEnigma 5/6/07 . chapter 1Continue, please! |