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| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-29 ch 5, | abuseMan didn't see that comin' I wish I could see the look on Artha's face, it would be priceless, please update soon. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-29 ch 4, | abuseOMG poor Decepshun, you are absolutely right, she did live a hard life *sobbing* |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-29 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter, but one thing keeps bugging me. You say that Wyldfyr is a female right? Well in the series stated by the writter (who can't remember his name right now) Wyldfyr isn't supossed to be a male?. You don't have to take things what I say literally maybe I'm wrong. Anyway like I said GREAT chapter, keep up the good work. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-29 ch 2, | abuseYEHAW, go Decepshun, but I think Beau is acting a little bit childish. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseNice start, Moordryd is such a brat but I like him anyway, keep up the good work. |
| CrystalWildfyr 2008-01-24 ch 5, | abuseAlright, I'm hooked, more hurting Artha and MoordrydxKitt/KittxMoordryd. YAY! More DF(DEG)! |
| Silver 2008-01-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseReally good only error i saw was in the 4th chapter when it said herself and it should of been yourself. anyway really good can't wait to read more :D |
| Bonebreaker 2007-06-30 ch 4, | abuseget on with the next chapter already love! lol. loving it |
| jess 2007-06-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseAW! poor decepshun! I WANT MORE! that was a very good story by the way! maybe u could try and add some humour with coershun and cyrano, like they accidently set off a boogy trap? |
| Mermaid Ninja 2007-05-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou're kinda right about Beau. He's supposed to be the black and gold dragon of legend, but he's still young. Do you think you can have him grow up a bit. And maybe Decepshun could explain that she didn't always live the good life. |
| Liliwen 2007-05-08 ch 2, | abuseI *heart* this story so far! Go Decepshun and the M/Kness! lol |
| Mermaid Ninja 2007-05-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseI guess you're sort of right. Beau has a lot of growing up to do before he's ready to save anyone. |