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Tzeveliniu
2008-01-29
ch 5,
abuseMan didn't see that comin' I wish I could see the look on Artha's face, it would be priceless, please update soon.
Tzeveliniu
2008-01-29
ch 4,
abuseOMG poor Decepshun, you are absolutely right, she did live a hard life *sobbing*
Tzeveliniu
2008-01-29
ch 3,
abuseGreat chapter, but one thing keeps bugging me. You say that Wyldfyr is a female right? Well in the series stated by the writter (who can't remember his name right now) Wyldfyr isn't supossed to be a male?. You don't have to take things what I say literally maybe I'm wrong.


Anyway like I said GREAT chapter, keep up the good work.
Tzeveliniu
2008-01-29
ch 2,
abuseYEHAW, go Decepshun, but I think Beau is acting a little bit childish.
Tzeveliniu
2008-01-29
ch 1,
abuseNice start, Moordryd is such a brat but I like him anyway, keep up the good work.
CrystalWildfyr
2008-01-24
ch 5,
abuseAlright, I'm hooked, more hurting Artha and MoordrydxKitt/KittxMoordryd. YAY! More DF(DEG)!
Silver
2008-01-21
ch 5, anon.
abuseReally good only error i saw was in the 4th chapter when it said herself and it should of been yourself. anyway really good can't wait to read more :D
Bonebreaker
2007-06-30
ch 4,
abuseget on with the next chapter already love! lol. loving it
jess
2007-06-16
ch 4, anon.
abuseAW!

poor decepshun! I WANT MORE!

that was a very good story by the way! maybe u could try and add some humour with coershun and cyrano, like they accidently set off a boogy trap?
Mermaid Ninja
2007-05-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou're kinda right about Beau. He's supposed to be the black and gold dragon of legend, but he's still young. Do you think you can have him grow up a bit. And maybe Decepshun could explain that she didn't always live the good life.
Liliwen
2007-05-08
ch 2,
abuseI *heart* this story so far! Go Decepshun and the M/Kness! lol
Mermaid Ninja
2007-05-07
ch 2, anon.
abuseI guess you're sort of right. Beau has a lot of growing up to do before he's ready to save anyone.
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