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Mermaid Ninja
2007-05-12
ch 3, anon.
abuseI've read about what's wrong with Kitt. It's called ventrilical fibulation or someting like that. Basically, it means your heart's beating like crazy and it's murder on your heart chambers. Any way, great story! P.S. My Mom's a doctor, that how I know these things.
daydream53
2007-05-10
ch 1,
abusekind of, well i got to say it
very short, i hope you update soon, with a longer chapter, but that wont be very hard.
That was mean sorry.
any who, i like it and i hope you udpate soon

Love
Dream
Liliwen
2007-05-08
ch 1,
abuseGood so far, can't wait to see Moordryd come in. And poor Kitt, she hurt bad?
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