This was extraordinarily powerful and painful too.

that's very good

Oh, no, no, no, no, no! You are not permitted to end this! OMG! I've never read a fic like this. Will she come back? Will she rejoin the team, or just visit? I hope your muses don't give up. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

Aw! So sad, but beautiful. Good job!

I'm not sure if I love you or hate you. This story was touching, wonderful but heartwrenching as well, I don't know how you do it, but you always manage to make a story wonderful.

I loved this can't wait for more stories from you. But please could you give us a happy, ending maybe just a touch of fluff?