This is a brilliant story, loved it :D. Hope my last comment didn't sound as negative as I'm sure now that it did, it wasn't suppose to be, but this is a really good fic. :) I enjoyed it a lot.

This is a really great story :D. Though I can honestly say that I don't like Jim and Bexley. Fine when they were kids, but at 14, 15, 16 they are total prats, Them taunting a 'ghost' (so to speak) with food just plain cruel and git-ish :P, if you actually think about it, it's quite sick. I don't know maybe it's just me but it was just plain cruel, Lister was very cruel with that and the whole 'switching off' thing as well, not sure what it was about that but the food thing made me think of someone laughing and waving meat in front of a man starving to death's face, sickeningly mean. Great story though, it's really good :)

hang on, what about that scene in future echoes where Rimmer sees Bexley get killed?

Kelly:

I'me very impressed with this story, you really captured the "essence" of RD, especially Rimmer and Dave. I had always wondered why the series never explained what happened. I just thought that I missed a season or something. Thanks and keep up the great work. "Smoke me a kipper, I'll be back for breakfast!"

Evergreen

Fantastic story! Really draws you in; which is what good stories are meant too! You have so much talent! You should look at becoming a professional writer! : )

I always wondered what happened with the twins. It was entertaining reading your version of events.

A rather fabulous first chapter! Excellent writing - characters to a T - and it's all correctly spelt, grammaticised(?don'task?), apostrophed - which isn't absolutely necessary but I'm a bit pedantic on that front and it's nice when there're no mistakes flagging up on your Crimes Against English sensors. :D

PLUS there're a whole 28 more chapters of loveliness for me to dive into and enjoy. I should begin right away. :)

LOve, Pig.

yayzerz! I always thought they should make a midway episode... this fanfiction seems to be a good replacement.

that was a great story, took me three days to read it but it was great.

Didn't know there were RedDwarf books so i got two looking for the others. (yay)

Thanks for the laughs

E.

Aw - it's the end of an era!

I'm very much looking forward to reading more of your works! You're a very good writer!

Keep it up kiddo!

Well, poo. It's over. Nevertheless, it's a fantastic story especially seeing as it's fanfic - I find it really hard to write with other's characters. Your writing is practically parallel with Grant Naylor's style, and you've got the characters down pat. You should totally send this into the Red Dwarf website :D

Aw - you're making me cry now!

For someone who sees themself as a comedy writer you're one hell of a drama writer. This chapters brilliant! I think you've really cracked it when you can make someone cry with your writing!

Superb!

The angst! D: Poor, poor Listy. And the boyz. Still, RD has room for drama, with little bits of comedy - you handled that really well, with the parallel crew and stuff. :3

Hitchhikers rocks! I love that alien that lived forever and insulted everyone!

I'd better write an actual review how huh? Ahem, I hate Tim - I know we never saw him in the show and there were only brief references, but these alone were enough to make me loathe him! I'm glad his was set alight!

I loved Cat's line about the present to himself...also this chapter has made me hungry! Good!

Aw, nice bit of comic relief before the end. I like Hitchhiker'
s Guide, too - I think I've listened to the whole radio series. The RD books to remind me of Hitchhiker - the style, the ridiculous futuristic stories (like how Polymorphs came to be) etc. Anyways, nicely done.