beautiful

omg... i think i might start crying!

that was amazing and very sha're like... they havent brought her up in a while, but i suppose she's right... after spending so much time with jack, he is a soldier now, but like she said "a soldier of truth and justice... but a soldier nonetheless" totally daniel! he is harder with strangers now, but the old daniel is still there (i think)

this was very touching, i love it. i think i might cry anyway... it was bittersweet knowing that daniel loves her, but cant accept anyone... but knowing that sha're notices this is even more bittersweet... thank you for this! *hugs*

~Shay~

Sniffle, sob, that was great, sniff

so sweet, liked you did it for sha'res point of view.

cool idea. I really like it :)

Ok, that is just extremely well done. How touching! What a wonderful, almost magical story. You pegged him right between the eyes. And it took Sha're's voice. Incredible. I hope there's more.

Aw, I loved this! Short but sweet. It's an interesting (and different) perspective to take for a Daniel/Vala story/fic. You did it well :)

so beautiful! its so sad but iloved it.
your very talented
thank you!

smlies
:) El

Wow. Interesting perspective. I like the style you use. It seems to match Sha're's voice quite well.
To be honest, I'm not sure what to make of this. Sha're seemed almost upset when she called Daniel cold, or maybe a bit disappointed in him. But at the same time, she genuinely wanted him to be happy. Maybe it's just that she's conflicted over what she sees in him.
Either way, I found this piece so interesting that I read it three times. It's thought provoking and nicely written.

Great Start I like Sha're's words and what she said. I don't think Daniel is ever cold but maybe closed down but not cold but other than that I loved it.