This story is out of order from cannon, yet I like it for some odd reason. It speaks to me. Like, contimplated about if really Axel really wanted Roxas to be a heartless after he merged with Sora. And also what Axel and Namine talked about after Riku let them go. This may give some ideas and would gladly give some credit to you for it.

interesting

Wow! This is a really powerful beginning and i dont think i'll be able to take up your challenge (however i heartily endorse someone else's attempts to try!)

Its so great to be able to read some new works of yours Miyamashi, and this is excellent! Keep writing, i dont care what, as long as i can read it! ^_^

Ohmigosh this is great! I might even pick it up, although I need some idea of where I'm taking it first, and also I should probably wait until my exams are over. Curse you, end of term!

Astounding.