i personally liked it. is naruto the blue sjy or somehing?

Why do you say you're bad at poetry?

Your work's good! It's simple but gives off a great impact. Man, you're so talented.

And... uhm... can I have a request, please? Can you write another poem? Ever since "The Toad" lectured us about the poetry thing, I wanna learn more about it. I need examples!

I salute you for being a great poet, dear cuz. SERVIAM! *Blue Knight ko kuno... as if!*

Oh. I like this. A lot. That's a brilliant idea, relating Hinata to a bird. I think with the way you wrote this, the idea of Hinata and birds makes more sense than the whole Neji-bird thing. :D

I just - love it! The whole thing, it suits Hinata so well. I think you really captured her character with this. -applauds enthusiastically- Wonderful!

Ah yes, and about the part when Tenten murders the guard in Crossing Stars...probably about a month ago I would have thought it was morbid. Horribly morbid. I would have been like "whoa, dark angst-type death-fic alert! Back away!" But I don't know...I guess I've changed a bit lately. I think while I was doing my whole in-depth exploring of Naruto characters thing, I kinda realized that these are ninja fics, they're gonna HAVE death in them. Not to say I enjoy reading those scenes or anything. But I think they put an interesting perspective on things.

Anyway. Great job on your Hinata fic!

i love it