 nwyd 2009-10-12 . chapter 6the story is so awesome! i really hope you update! |
 EvilChikara 2009-10-12 . chapter 6This story is fabulous! I really love it so much~! Sasuke and Hinata are...expressing their inner-joy? o.o' maybe not...
Pfft. He thinks he can 'tame' Hinata! He's clearly mistaken!
I hope she loves the kid just to ** off Sasuke.
He's such a perv lol. Having sex when she's prego? xD He really wants a hybrid, doesn't he?
Then there's poor Hanabi whos so confused with everything and probaly life itself. |
 Lili Peterson 2009-09-12 . chapter 6 why wont u update?
*sniffles* |
 Live For You 2009-09-04 . chapter 6I was a little iffy at the beginning, but now, i really want to know what happens next. I really like how you got deep into Hanabi and Neji's feelings about Hinata, and how-i think-a lot of people wouldnt't think about it that way, unless they read this. I really wonder what would happen if a child was born to an Uchiha and Hyuuga. Would they have the byakugan or sharingan? Or possibly create something new? I dont' know, that's for you to write. So, please update, and I'm sorry if that's annoying, I really like this story, it's so sophisticated and deep, can't wait for the update. |
 lissibear 2009-07-11 . chapter 6This is one of the most well written and interesting stories I have read on fanfiction. It really is a shame that you haven't finished it oh well. |
 KatSin 2009-06-15 . chapter 6Hinata will win this war with Sasuke, her kindness and compassion will easily outclass his hate and bloodlust. |
 KatSin 2009-06-15 . chapter 5Hinata has no reason to be afraid of Sasuke. He can't kill her without killing the child, and she is surely used to pain by now. |
 KatSin 2009-06-15 . chapter 4And excellent revenge. ^_^ |
 KatSin 2009-06-15 . chapter 3*sighs* Sasuke... so foolish... |
 KatSin 2009-06-15 . chapter 2Aww *hearts Neji* He's so devoted to finding her ^_^ |
 KatSin 2009-06-15 . chapter 1Poor Sasuke... he has the perfect woman there, and he's too afraid to let himself really feel for her... *sighs* |
 Likes to Smile 2009-06-06 . chapter 6This is a purely amazing chapstory. I love it =) |
 WhereDidMyPenNameGo 2009-04-14 . chapter 6This is great overall; although some choice words may need some reconsideration (it's fine if you just leave it there) and I like the subtle changes in character dynamics. Please, please please continue |
 in your dreams as well 2009-03-18 . chapter 6plz update soon i really like it but plz put more sasuhina than hanabi i dont hate her but i just dont like the fact that shes in this fic more than hinata |
 waiting 2009-03-11 . chapter 1 FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ... PLEASE UPLOAD! |