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nwyd
2009-10-12 . chapter 6
the story is so awesome! i really hope you update!
EvilChikara
2009-10-12 . chapter 6
This story is fabulous! I really love it so much~! Sasuke and Hinata are...expressing their inner-joy? o.o' maybe not...
Pfft. He thinks he can 'tame' Hinata! He's clearly mistaken!
I hope she loves the kid just to ** off Sasuke.
He's such a perv lol. Having sex when she's prego? xD He really wants a hybrid, doesn't he?
Then there's poor Hanabi whos so confused with everything and probaly life itself.
Lili Peterson
2009-09-12 . chapter 6
why wont u update?
*sniffles*
Live For You
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
I was a little iffy at the beginning, but now, i really want to know what happens next. I really like how you got deep into Hanabi and Neji's feelings about Hinata, and how-i think-a lot of people wouldnt't think about it that way, unless they read this. I really wonder what would happen if a child was born to an Uchiha and Hyuuga. Would they have the byakugan or sharingan? Or possibly create something new? I dont' know, that's for you to write. So, please update, and I'm sorry if that's annoying, I really like this story, it's so sophisticated and deep, can't wait for the update.
lissibear
2009-07-11 . chapter 6
This is one of the most well written and interesting stories I have read on fanfiction. It really is a shame that you haven't finished it oh well.
KatSin
2009-06-15 . chapter 6
Hinata will win this war with Sasuke, her kindness and compassion will easily outclass his hate and bloodlust.
KatSin
2009-06-15 . chapter 5
Hinata has no reason to be afraid of Sasuke. He can't kill her without killing the child, and she is surely used to pain by now.
KatSin
2009-06-15 . chapter 4
And excellent revenge. ^_^
KatSin
2009-06-15 . chapter 3
*sighs* Sasuke... so foolish...
KatSin
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
Aww *hearts Neji* He's so devoted to finding her ^_^
KatSin
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
Poor Sasuke... he has the perfect woman there, and he's too afraid to let himself really feel for her... *sighs*
Likes to Smile
2009-06-06 . chapter 6
This is a purely amazing chapstory. I love it =)
WhereDidMyPenNameGo
2009-04-14 . chapter 6
This is great overall; although some choice words may need some reconsideration (it's fine if you just leave it there) and I like the subtle changes in character dynamics. Please, please please continue
in your dreams as well
2009-03-18 . chapter 6
plz update soon i really like it but plz put more sasuhina than hanabi i dont hate her but i just dont like the fact that shes in this fic more than hinata
waiting
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD ... PLEASE UPLOAD!
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