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| Thundercracker417 2008-06-27 ch 10, | abuseHey, its me from Deviantart! Just wanted to say hello! |
| Philip Gipson 2008-06-05 ch 10, anon. | abuseGreetings again, Kenya. I liked the latest chapter of "Thundercracker's Glory" you posted. It showcases Glory's need to be on the battlefield, even though she's a sparkling. She hides away in a box that Constructicon Long Haul carries to an energy facility with the other Decepticons...until her cover is blown. Soon Decepticon and Autobot alike start fighting each other, and Glory is caught in the middle. It's only after her Uncle T (Thundercracker) escorts her away that she knows what the Autobots will do to her. There will not be any safety for her now that they know about her. Megatron has something big for her in store. Guess we'll find out. In my last review, I meant to say "The Transformers: The Compiled Data *Tracks*," not "Files." It's still available on YouTube whenever you wanna look at it. And please bring your story up to date again. |
| Violetlight 2008-05-30 ch 10, | abuseIt's been a while since your last chapter, but it was well worth the wait. Glory's first battle experience was amazing. I loved the Insecticons' descriptions of the Autobots in the first part of the chapter -- I'm sure some 'Bots would be quite flattered -- and seeing Soundwave's almost parental concern for his cassettes. I wonder what Glory's future function will be? Even in the chaos of this first "battle" of hers, it seemed obvious to me that she'll make a great Decepticon warrior one day, that is, if the Autobots don't decide to "save" her from the 'Cons first. Keep those updates coming! |
| Hebi R. 2008-05-30 ch 10, anon. | abuseThanks so much for updating! |
| Amethyst Authoress 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseNice chapter. Glory was bound to somehow wind up on the battlefield eventually. I wonder how the other autobots would have reacted to seeing her. Update soon. I can't wait for chapter 11. |
| Glue Stick Gary 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseYAY! The insecticons are in this one! It was really funny when Kickback stuck his head in Glory's hiding place. She screams, then he screams. lol thats awesome. Glory on the battle field? I agree with everyone who said it in the fic, its too dangerous for a 'lil kid like her. I wonder what would had happened if the Autobots had a hold of her. TC would get woorried. Anyways, you are a amazing writter! One of my favorites on fanfic. Keep up the good work! |
| Alaskan Olive 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseI giggled when you brought the Insecticons in, for some reason I like those three. ^^ And Starscream...envy is a deadly sin, ya know. lol Well, Glory, ya wanted to be on the battlefield, wish granted! Lol, poor thing. I wonder what Prime was thinking when he saw the little sparkling from the video on the battlefield. Ah! I'm so excited! I can't wait for the next chapter! XD ~Olive |
| blood shifter 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseit was bound to happen sooner or later. awesome chapter. update soon please. |
| Artemis-chan of Redwing 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseGood chapter! Poor Glory, being regaled of stories by the Insecticons, and then ending up on the battlefield. I just keep wondering what is going to happen to her. ^_^ Artemis-chan |
| GrimlockX4 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseSo Glory is going to get training to be ready in battle, huh? Cool! Good luck to you on chapter 11. |
| flamingmarsh 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseyou have this on deviant art too! Anyway, I really, really really love this story! I love thundercracker and him being an uncle to his neice is so cute! It's more awesome, when the Decepticons are liking her to and wanting to her help her out! Well keep up the good work! I can't wait for 11! |
| D. Mischief 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseyay!! I love this story so much. Each chapter brings something new to light. I hope we get to learn what Prime said to Thundercracker. |
| Lady Sunflower 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseI want to know more about TC's WoW guild! Bwahahahaha! |
| Dragowolf 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseOh boy... so Glory is going to be let out on to the battlefield is she? Poor TC is going to have spark faluilar if this keeps up... I wonder how Glory's protectors in the Autobots will take to her being outside? Please more soon! This is a cute story! |
| amber Kat 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseanother great chapter - hopefully Megatron doesn't have anything too big planned for her yet - kid can only take so much :) |