 astrakage 2009-09-24 . chapter 14Wow, this is a really cool story twist. I've never seen it's like. I hope that you put more up soon. I love what you have so far. |
 decepticonsfangirl 2009-08-05 . chapter 14aw! glory's so CUTE! hope TC doesn't have a spark attack! *hugs tc* i hate it that ironhide is trying to make her an autobot and take her away from her uncle T!please make more chappies soom :D |
 Hebi R. 2009-07-30 . chapter 14REALLY looking foreward to the next exciting chapter.
I am surprised hearing about the way most of the Decepticons react to this little sparkiling failed to crash any Autobot CPUs, or overload logic circuits. |
 Thundercracker 2009-07-29 . chapter 14Optimus should've contacted the Nemesis and told them of the situation from the get go, instead of treading this out. Prime had better keep a very close eye on Glory and have ONLY the most trusted of bots to watch her.
Jazz and Ironhide's intentions to keep the sparkling among the Autobots should be taken as a signal for Optimus to watch those two VERY carrefully until the is back with her family.
Great story. I'm glad I faved it. |
 hippyhoppyfunkyfish 2009-07-28 . chapter 14i love this story so much. i can't wait until Glory gets back to TC :) love your writing!! can't wait for the nect chapter! |
 xTheSkyIsFallingx 2009-07-26 . chapter 14Absolutely amazing. This is one of the best stories I've read! I see no errors and I really hope you update soon!! |
 Silver-ShadowSpark 2009-07-15 . chapter 14Good chapter.
Spark |
 Heart of the Demons 2009-07-14 . chapter 14Glory is still in the Autobots' care...and thanks a little human persuasion, she warms up to her captives. But nothing lasts forever. Despite two of his fellow Autobots' objections, Optimus Prime has no choice but to return Glory to her own brethren, the Decepticons. I think there WILL be ** to pay in the next chapter. Well, I shall wait. |
 Silveriss 2009-07-14 . chapter 14I do like the way this chapter turned out. It's actually a very intelligent look at children and how they fit in a society at war.
Thanks for sharing. |
 Shirox 2009-07-14 . chapter 14Oh i really hope they will return her to her Uncle T, aw ;( Very cute story :) |
 pikachu13 2009-07-14 . chapter 14Thanks for updating! I really like this fic. its so warm and cute! but now that shes in Autobot hands, will she be able to accept the love and affection Autobots and humans have to offer?
Other than living in a place where Cons cant stand the sight of her, save for a few, (her Unkie and the cassetticons) or will she prefer to stay in a place where everybody sees her as a welcome addition?
Oh well, I guess we'll soon find out! |
 Elita One 2009-07-14 . chapter 14poor glory
good thing the autobots have humans lol |
 cmdrtekk 2009-07-14 . chapter 14Nice update you have here. Much was revealed to the Autobots about Glory, and it was cleverly done. Important points that help the Officers in their discussion in what to do with Glory.
"Sadly, there is logic to both sides of this argument," Prowl replied to Prime's disappointment. "I must think on this further." Was a well placed, very in character line for Prowl. In fact I think you did a great job conveying the Autobot Officers throughout their discussion by what each of them said. It was all things you would expect each to say, and points of view you would expect each to have.
Looking forward to the next part. |
 flamingmarsh 2009-07-14 . chapter 14yay you updated.
it was a great chapter. I'm glad Chip got Glory to come out.
I hope Megatron won't be too angry when he learns Glory is with the Autobots.
and i suppose Ironhide and Jazz might try something? I hope not. |
 hercat 2009-06-23 . chapter 13I've read several of your stories and I like this one the best. The characters have a lot of depth here, and there are some real moral issues here. It's very well done. |