I will wait take your time (hums a tune inside of head)

Hey there, just wanted to say that I just read all 13 chapters straight(yes, I'm slightly outdated) and I love the way you write! Keep up the great work, and can't wait to see a mature scene soon*winks*=)

I stopped reading when you started the whole unlucky cat thing, i'm a cat lover, it was ...offputting. I can't bring myself to read the rest.

*hids bricks*

take your time Dude

we can wait

EA out

You are a good author. You’re story is well written though it isn’t exactly to my tastes. I liked it better once all the main characters, Loonatics as well as Ghost, got in on the action and adventure. I also rather liked the Tech and Mastermind piece. The mindscapes were also well done. Keep writing and answer those questions, please.

I love this they way you got the dream sequence on the three loonatics its so awesome. Ghost still rocks and you did a very good job on how you got him to delve into the mid of the three loonatics. I can't wait for Ace's answer on his fear you are so good on your writing keep up the good work.

so uh what do Wolf and Tiger have to do with the loonatics? im confussed. i love the discriptions though!! very deep and well thought.

very nice story! cann't wait to read the back storys!

I love it this. But you have to work on your spelling check it over carefully. Anyway this story rocks you made Ghost so defenseless and more mortal, i like how this is going here. Keep it up, I wish i was there to help ghost but that is the effect you were looking for for the reader to react. I can't wait for the next chappie.

This ROCKS. I even got the music you used for the fighting sequence downloaded to my PSP. I will hear it later keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what will Ghost do next. He is a bad ass in every sense.

Dude I love this chappie it rocks awnd this new OC Ghost will be something the Loonatics will try to get used to as a member. I haven't read the next chappie just of yet but I will read it and get back to you on it. Keep up the good work.


ShiningShadow2900

Long chapter indeed.
But I admire you for it.
I wish my chapters were half that long. xD

Anywho, very interesting!
Hope you update soon. =3

Aww, gotta love Rev and Tech. =3 I don't personally support them as a couple... but your portrayal of them wasn't half bad.
Very interesting story, I must say. I'm sorry about your cat, by the way. =/ I know how you feel...
My hamster died in May and I still can't accept his death. I took him to the vet but he didn't make it. R.I.P. to your kitty. :3

I believe you mean 'FIN' and not 'FINE'? xD

Y HELO THAR

Cool fic. :D

Interesting...this is the last Loonatics fanfic chapter, correct? Now door to Darkness, Anthros!