Not usually my cup 'o tea, but it was okay. I didn't understand a bit of it, but poetry kinda escapes me. I like how you wrote some of the phrases though.

Alex

This is just simply amazing. All of it, head to toe is just magical imagery and edgy yet sweet presence, leading you on so concretely and alluringly...Please do the world a favor and never put down your pen.

That was amazing. Can't really say much else.

One of the most incredible pieces I've ever read. The stlye and the idea were genius. It really had some of the old style in it and the lines from the play (which I would recognize anywhere) were mixed in very well. You've got an immense talent for writing

...you wrote narrative poetry. I did not expect that. I certainly didn't expect it to be good. But it was. I'm not sure I'd call it fanfiction. But I was very pleasantly surprised and enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting it.

That was a.maz.ing. You are an incredible writer. The language and imagery in your poem was absolutely beautiful and the story was superbly done. I think I like your Romeo and Juliet better than the original.

I'm...absolutely speechless. All I can muster is "Bravo".

*Chippy

Gorgeous! I never would have thought of using a narrative poem, or though that I'd enjoy reading one either, but your phrases are so lovely, and your story very compelling. I am completely in love with your poem! The cocktail theme is just brilliant.

Where did you come up with that? Man, at first I was a little nervous about reading it, but when I di, I was hooked to the end. It seems ... strangely beautiful, and oddly dangerous, one of those things you know you shouldn't read, or write, but have to. There's such a rush you get off reading it. It was awesome!

Oh my God. I was not expecting this at all when I clicked on this fic. Your poetry is... amazing. You have a supurb command of language and the twist on R&J was wonderfully original. Forget fanfiction- this is publishing quality. Thank you.

Beautiful...and original. I loved it. Nice job.

I’m absolutely speechless right now. Once I started reading, I couldn’t bring myself to look away from the screen. Bold, erotic, beautiful – no words can describe this! Your style is amazing. It really grips the reader!
I’ve always loved Romeo and Juliet and this wonderful look at it only made me love it more! I’m definitely madly in love with your poetry!