if yuffie hadnt been there, I would totally love it
the first two chapters were nice but I dont like the last one that much >_

Omg that was weird *twich twich* (so used to Yaoi) it was good! i can't wait poor Sora! So if he's raped then. . . i don't get it! please hurry!

I loved it keep writeing this is amazing I can imagine Sora's face^-^he's so cute

Oi! Now that I heard Sora...my mind has changed from Sephiroth to him. hehehe. But I still am staying with yuffie for da girlz!

A mind changed note from the ever happy~
No-Chan

Hm I'd say yes to the foursome but no to the girl... haha
I'd have to say I'd like to see a foursome between Squall, Cloud, Sephy, and Seifer haha that would be absolutely AWESOME!

~Elli

Woah! Squall's aggressive! hee hee never knew he had it in him ^-^

yeah 4some...or more sora and riku, axel and roxes

please! please continue!

HOLY MOTHER OF CRAP! That was HOT!
More Leon/Cloud buttsmex please /pervy grin/
And as for a threesome I think...Yuffie should be the girl.(I hate Tifa and Kairi is a bit too...innocent for threesomes in my opinion xD)
Boys...Sephiroth!

holy crap!? There's more!? YES!

i luv this story plz update soon. I vote for sora joining them. If sora does join i would luv to see him as seme.plz n thank u.

YOu should throw in Riku It'd be drool worthy..not that I'm not drooling now or anyhting XD, but yeha, and my vote for the girl would ahve to be Tifa, no offence but I dun like Kairi that much.

O.O
Yez! Hawt action!
Hrm...my best bet would wanting Sephi in there! But then you should include a girl...but then again maybe you shouldn't...Girl...No girl...Well, I would say Yuff but she seems to be the one who would much rather like to film it and keep it on memory tapes then be in it...But if you have to add a girl in there, Yuff is definitely it!

A skittle smelling and quite headache filled note from~
No-Chan

ha ha'how straight are you?'really good.i thonk you should add Riku and maybe either Tifa or yuffi but whatever is easier for you.update soon.