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Silver-Serval 2007-11-23 ch 17,	abuseGood story. And I loved Sodapop...So funny! Love your style, and I'd certainly enjoy learning more about Katherine. What would happen if she met Ponyboy? That'd be interesting.
GoldenMerlin 2007-07-09 ch 16,	abuseThat's so sweet :)
GoldenMerlin 2007-07-09 ch 15,	abuse11:32 (no idea why I'm putting in the time...) "I suddenly remembered that I had two brothers, not just one." Hmm..He doesn't know about the extra? Wow. I love this line: "And then we could work on becoming a family again." BTW: It didn't scare me too bad. :D It's just a "thing"...IDK.
GoldenMerlin 2007-07-09 ch 14,	abuse"It’s funny how no matter what the circumstances, there are little routines everyone sticks to automatically." That kind of scared me. Not that it wasn't a good line. It just scared me. I don't know why I mentioned that. I just thought I'd say so. Oh. Wow. Whoa. "Where did that come from." Seriously though-wow. I was not expecting that.
GoldenMerlin 2007-07-09 ch 13,	abuseWow. I should have known that the parent thing was coming, but the other things surrounding the adoption were too strong for me to remember. The sign of a good author: lets the reader easily slip into the character's mind. I think you did a good job with Two-Bit. I'm not so sure about Soda, though...I mean it's out of character,but he is going through a lot. I'm not sure if that was OOC or not, lol.
GoldenMerlin 2007-07-09 ch 11,	abuseI haven't reviewed since chapter two because I don't have anything to say. This is so great: it's just as good the book, it could be a sequel written by S.E. Hinton herself. I'm serious. I love how you put in humour, but it gives off a general serious effect. I honestly don't have any criticism, and I generally do...I really don't want to get to the epilogue because it will be over...But then, I'll just have to read your other fics, won't I? cough stalk you cough JK :P
GoldenMerlin 2007-07-09 ch 2,	abuseWow. I love how you make him kind of paranoid about everyone, it makes him seem more real.
caitly 2007-07-03 ch 17,	abuseaw! It's so sad! I love it!!
xodamhsoirxo 2007-07-01 ch 17,	abuseI think I'd like to hear about Katherine, I think...I don't know, if Pony went and got all mommy with her and stuff (trust me, i know how weird that sounds :P) I don't know if I could deal with it! I mean, the Curtis' took such good care of him and loved and treated hyim exactly the same as Soda and Darry, she made her decision...that sounds so mean of me, I know. I'm done now. I'm such a pest. Awesome story though, i loved loved loved it.
tomisaqt 2007-06-30 ch 17,	abuseIt was random, but good. I liked it. I think this could be the start of a really great story. I hope to see more soon!
dreamer 3097 2007-06-29 ch 17,	abusei like this
Lost But Found 2007-06-29 ch 17,	abuseim taking a wild guess and saying that the two teenagers on the bus were Two-Bit and Ponyboy. im right, aren't i? i knew it. i was. the randomness of it fit in, oddly. and it was interesting to see how his mother acutally lived. i had been pictuing her in my head as someone who had a kid too young with a guy that really didn't care, and didn't really think back on it after he was gone. kind of like a party girl i guess. but i guess i was wrong. you got the tone of this completly different than the rest of the story, and it fit. all the other chapters were like, desperate to understand, or not understanding. but this one was different, understanding everything and almost wishing it to be different. i think i used the word different too much. anyway, great story, great plot idea, great writing, great everything. i loved every minute of it.
FlaminSquirrelz 2007-06-29 ch 17,	abuseAw. That was good. I'm glad Soda got pissed off, he deserved to. And that line about Soda looking up the number and THEN calling Darry was funny. :P Good job.
Lost But Found 2007-06-29 ch 16,	abusei have to say, i loved the reference to the info being a scar. it seemed to fit in perfectly. and the part where he says 'Bruises heal, but scars stay there forever. Who knows that better than you?' it was amazingly well done. i know its only two sentences, but hey, they struck me.
the-bunnys-echo 2007-06-29 ch 17,	abuseOMG! It's over. I think you should definetly make another story off this. Great job.

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