I must say that I have really enjoyed your fanfiction. Your writing style rules, from the mixture of words to that illstrious use of funny little additions.
Dodgeball sucks, I must agree on that one. This kind of reminds me of my own days in primary schoolXD

You got their personalities absolutely right... Our little Sephy being his usual self and Hojo caring for him in his own, twisted Hojo-like wayXD

Woot. Hojo pwned in dodgeball is the funniest thing I've read today.

Anyone who writes a comedy centered around Hojo is cool. I especially love seeing him interact with a young Sephiroth. I am intimidated to write for Hojo because I don't feel like I would make him sound smart enough. You've done a marvelous job and for all his intelligence, you've managed to make Sephiroth eclipse him. I can't tell you how many times I laughed out loud reading this fic as well as your other Professor Hojo vs. the ShinRa Accounting Department. You have a fan if you ever feel like writing more of these.

Hojo feeling proud of Sephiroth mouthing off the teacher is hilarious. XD Great fic. This relationship is so interesting when you try to get under the whole researcher-specimen angle. Lovely work!

~fd97

seph in school...
let the blood bath begin!!

This story is amazing.XD And yes, making 3D maps out of dough is probably almost everyone's favorite hobby.

Dodgeball may suck, but Murderball is much better, no pesky lines that you can't cross, just a class of thirty-something students all wielding hard-foam balls at each other. It's heaven.

Anyways, I love lil' Sephiroth! Hojo was hiliarous too, which is an attribute one doesn't normally attribute to the creepy scientist. Excellent work, I loved it.

I loved this! You have a lovely sense of humour, and a great way of showing characterisation. I love the fact the Sephiroth is a little rebel. In a lot of things I've read, he's been really pathetic and all that throughout his childhood, but I love this interpretation :)
Almost felt sorry for Hojo there. Almost.
Keep up the good work!

Your Hojo stories are priceless. I absolute LOVE how you portray him! He's so full of himself, dangerously crazy, deliciously sarcastic and in this last one there was even a tiniest glimmer of humanity.
Hojo vs Education and vs the accountants always makes me laugh.
No matter how many times I read them, they always make me laugh.
Kudos for making our favorite scientist into a pure gem!
I'd quote my favorite parts, but I'd only end up quoting the entire fic. So much brilliance!

That was awesome! Utterly hilarious - made me laugh out loud so many times! And for the record, I'm equally fascinated by the whole Hojo/Sephiroth "relationship". *Hopes you've written more of the two and shall investigate you're profile shortly*

One thing though, some of the longer sentances could do with a few commas inserted here and there - would make it easier to read by breaking it up a little ;)

Anyways, awesome fic *favourites*. Keep up the good work XD

That totally rocked! I now have a new appreciation for what Sephiroth went through as a child.

i loved this! the vocabulary was phenomanal!! this is just faboulous!(:

This series is made of win.

Heh, I never had to suffer dodge ball til high school.

oh another awesome story ^.^ Your wit and cleverness never cease to amaze me.

~Undeniable.Mystique~

P.S if you ever get the time, please read and review my fics :D

YOU ARE MADE OF WIN. XD Ever since your last fanfic I've looked forward to another, and this sequel is awesome beyond all description. I'm also deeply interested in the relationship between father and son, and it's so hard to find fanfics that explore that relationship with sympathy, much less humour! Go you for being FANTASTIC at doing both!

*adds to favs*

...'he's just a crazy man that follows me around' XD -> That's a quote for the record books.