So often in Big O (or Batman) the protagonist is portrayed as a brooding misanthrope. Unlike Sunrise or Cartoon Network, you've allowed us to see what he is brooding about.

Wowza! You're a genious! Your writing is masterful, like paint to a canvas! My mind's eye sees this with such perfect clarity, I would believe Roger Smith to be a real person! Gosh, you're better than whomever actually created the anime! AND YOU'RE A MADONNA FAN! WOO HOO! My only complaint: You're perfect! You should be writing professionally, signing autographs for drooling fans, like myself!

Hope you get back to writing soon! MORE MORE MORE!

You nailed Roger's character in this fic. After watching every episode at least three times, I think he does doubt himself, and questions the work he does. The metaphor of servants and masters was also beautifully written.

Yay! Keep going! Just follow your instincts on this one. My complaint too short! ;]

Now that I've finally seen episode 13, this makes so much more sense than the first time I read it. Very nicely done, Serena!

It's strange how Cartoon Network never showed only 13 episodes of Big O. Were their only 13 or was the show not getting enough ratings for them to care about getting more? Well what ever the case, your story was very good.

I love reading your fanfics they are always really good

You know something? All your stories are too short. ;;;

You know something else? That's too bad for me, seeing as I love them so much.

This one is no exception. Please keep writing Big O fics, we need authors like you out there!

I loved this! You are the possessor of incredible talent, miss Serena! Actually, just a few days ago I borrowed the first volume of The Big O on DVD, and I was immediately hooked. It's strange, isn't it? How Roger manages to be such a wonderful character? Your interpretation of him, his voice, it's great. The only complaint I have is lengthwise-too short! Keep writing! Please...!

Oh pity. I enjoy ranting, but I'll make an exception in your case because I'm such a nice guy. Let's see, I immensely enjoyed this possible outcome of the enters proceeding Act 13. It was thought provoking (as much as I hate to think, it was anyway) and well written. Keep up the good work.

Wow! All that in an hour? All I can say is that you are Roger Smith and Dorothy wraped up in one ball. Who needs 2nd season. Oh! Did I say that out loud? o.O umm... of course we need 2nd season, but until then we have your stories to read. This fills in the empty deadend feelings we Big-O fans have.

Keep them coming. *_*

It's an interesting beginning, but it was rather short. I like how you don't bore the readers with useless petty details, because you're all about the characters, all about their feelings and experiences. I'll be looking forward to more. _-

So far that is one of the best continuations(?) I have read. I realy liked it!

Sheesh... very well written. If Roger is speaking with your voice, he sure has a way with words! What happens next? I hope you're working on it! Kill some more hours at work!

I really liked it. It was a good introspective piece. I loved how you used Dorothy's character in the story. The songs was a nice touch too. I only wish it was longer! Please, will you write more? Please?