wow! i am impressed! i realy liked it. i read a lot of MWPP stories and this is by far one of my top 3!

Interesting story. I have a few tips, for one the JamesandLily, or JamesandSirius, and especially the JamesandSiriusandRemusandPeter are REALLY hard to read. So instead, try something like James&Lily James&Sirius&Remus&Peter. If you have to run it together at all. It seperates it a little better. Ugh, there was something else, but I forgot so, oh well! lol, otherwise it was a good story. And I liked it.

A very deep and touching fic. You have captured the four of them well. I can't pick a favorite point of view, but I did find Sirius's quite intriguing. He's a bit bitter, isn't he? Remus's was understandable, but still very well done. I felt bad for Peter; I feel that way sometimes when I'm around some of my friends too. anyways, great fic!

hey! i liked it a lot! very interesting and unique.

Mm. Interesting! There are a couple of typos, but nothing major. I like Jealous!Sirius; the portrayal of James' relationship with Lily was oddly endearing.

Eh. Totally shameless plug here, but... You're certainly happily posting at FA (most former members LMWPPW do, yeah?), if I'm not mistaken, but, in any case, you could show up at We sort of specialise in MWPP authors, and we'd love to have you! /shameless plug.

Anyway... Good job!