>< ow poor dante!
poor lady!!

omg! this made me cry :(... poor dante... poor lady! you're a very talented author! keep up the good work! :D

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I cry. ;~;

One note, though: I think you lack commas.

That was sad. Poor Dante.

This Rocked :)

This is very very good. I like it.

Wow! that was really good! poor Dante...i luv him so...XD
Anyway, great fic! :D

Very well thought and you portrayed Dante very well. Like he didn't out right confess his love for Lady, it was an accident which I liked. I.E you didn't make him seem like an over bearing love-sick moron. In other series it's fine, but not in Devil May Cry.

You know, I'm a Dante and Lady fan, but I actually like this, because it was a very insightful and tasteful way of presenting their breakup. We know Lady's not there in DMC1, so they had to part at some point, and I really do like this version of that parting. It's also well-written, as there weren't any glaring errors to be found in the text. Awesome work.

You are a very talented writer.

To bad Lady didn't go back.

deep