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mysteryteenagelover
2008-11-21 . chapter 1
that was really good!
cant wait 4 more!
LukeNLorelai637
2008-06-25 . chapter 6
omg!
yet another awesome fic..
UPDATE please asap..
love it!
8 )
smileyGGfan
2008-04-25 . chapter 6
WHOA. I was expecting a chapter of LL phone sex...but I definitely didn't see all of that coming! (no pun intended lol).

The situation, dialogue, and everything else was so hott. And I was very excited to see how quickly Luke got on board with Lorelai's idea. I'm not sure how you're going to out do this chapter, but I'm positive you'll find another hot situation to write about. :) Update plz!
cywen69
2008-04-23 . chapter 6
Gotta love good phone sex. LOL, I think I would have snuck over to the diner though.

Wendy
CrimsonScarz
2008-04-20 . chapter 6
that was niice. haha. i love that even duiring phone sex, they can banter and have fun. it's awsome. really well done chatper :D
Loridhhp
2008-04-19 . chapter 6
Most excellent chapter! Although they could have gone hands free, so to speak, since most cell phones and house phones have a speaker button. Lol. I guess they didn't want to wake William! Great job!
Copop
2008-04-19 . chapter 6
Aw. Poor guys, have to help themselves that way. But it worked, and I guess from what they agreed on, they won't do it again, if not seriously needed :)

Keep them coming :)
gilmoreintraining
2008-04-19 . chapter 6
wow hot good chapter update soon
Samvalasam
2008-04-19 . chapter 6
awesome...a firefly/bsg con. that would be awesome. i met jewel staite a couple weeks ago when she was out here doing supanova. it was fantastic.
cant wait for more of ur fics
:D sam
smileyGGfan
2008-04-10 . chapter 5
Ah-mazing! From the hasty stripping of clothes, to the cool and then warm temperature of the water, to every last sexual act, this chapter was an absolute pleasure to read. The shower situation lived up to its expectations and was enjoyably very hott. I like how you're still able to keep a hold of Luke and Lorelai's personalities and quirks, like her fantasizing about his blue flannel and stubble as he's pleasuring her. Hoping you add some more dirty scenes real soon!
cywen69
2008-04-04 . chapter 5
So very hot. However, I don't think I'd want my head bent over doing those things with the possibility of shampoo dripping down into my mouth. LOL I really liked it though.

Wendy
Loridhhp
2008-04-03 . chapter 5
Yikes! I just read all 5 chapters! Now I need a cold shower! Lol! Wow! That was awesome. You're really good at the Dirty! I look forward to reading more. :D
lancer1993
2008-03-27 . chapter 5
HOT!

sorry nothing more to add.
CrimsonScarz
2008-03-26 . chapter 5
oh man. payback is a **...but sometimes that might just be what you were going for :D haha.

awsome. i loved the part in the middle when she was going on about how she loved him in all different styles. i think it's like fitting how he will fit in her life no matter where it leads. like he could fit in her rich family-the GQed part. and he fits in her normal family-flannel part. that's my take anyway.

awsome chapter. i really love this story. and of course comfort food. it's the same really. haha. :D
Copop
2008-03-26 . chapter 5
hehe, shower action. Even you should get clean there, it is kinda easy to get dirty in there. :P

Nice one!

Keep them coming :D
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