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| InuSmil3z 2007-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful |
| VooDooDoleigh 2007-07-02 ch 7, | abusePassionate!! |
| Jerkess 2007-07-01 ch 5, | abuseAW! It starts out so dark but then ends on a lighter, sweet note. Loved it, like always, for what's not to love about the RukiaxIchigoxGrimmjow triangle? Yeah, there's no comparison. :D Hmm, I think I spy many sentence errors... for example: 'Zangetsu now in both hands, and not even in bankai form, it had taken on a sleeker sheen. Glittering with some unknown power that Ichigo didn't know he even could muster' The glittering part could have been connected with a comma. Still, it's the great story that counts. XD -Jerkess PS Grimmjow's an **, but who cares! |
| SoDanielle 2007-05-19 ch 3, | abuse"It's a savage, carnal sort of kiss. A clash of teeth and tongue, blood on their white clothes." I got a chill when I read that. Loved the imagery in this one. Keep up the good work =D -SoDanielle |
| -AnGeLiCaNiMeKiTtY- 2007-05-19 ch 2, | abusethat was short and cute |
| SoDanielle 2007-05-18 ch 2, | abusezomgosh! these were lovely. you captured two of Rukia's most treasured relationships quite nicely. great job and I hope you update soon ^_^ -SoDanielle |
| the-long-lost-strawberry 2007-05-18 ch 2, | abuseAaw Rukia/Kaien and Ichigo/rukia stories? You got my two favorite pairings in one story that's awsome! XD I love these small one shots please continue! ^-^ |
| CJ 2007-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful as always. I love the Kaien and Rukia interaction, there's something innocent but deep in their raltionships. Sniffs, the what could have been if Kaien did survived the hollow attack. I look forward for many more (Kairuki and others) in the near future. Please? [insert Puss-in-Boots big cancelled that, insert Big Violet Rukia-I-just-seen-a-Chappy-plushie eyes] :) |