Beautiful.

I love this so much. You brought tears to my eyes when Hermione and Ron were talking/thinking about fighting for a future that doesn't involve a war. I loved this.

oh my goodness. i cant believe you came up with this idea. ITS THE SWEETEST STORY I HAVE ever READ. YOPU GOT talent!

Ah, that was so depressing and it made me want to cry. I loved it though. It's nice how Harry finds comfort knowing that Ron and Hermione love each other.

Wow that was such a good story, I don't know what to say! Please keep writing; you are so good!

You are certainly curing my night of badfics.

Yay to you for realizing that Ron is not a stupid prat. I love it when Ron is written like this- all worrying and... stuff... (forgive me, it's 2:15 am, I am not exactly coherent right now).

Anyway, I absolutely adored this. :D

Wow. I really liked that. I liked how you used present tense; it was creative. And the whole reflection thing worked out nicely.

And I love Ron.

--Cady

i'm way too lazy to log in, but i loved your fanfic. it was simply incredible!

the way you captured their thoughts, feelings, and actions.. oh my god.. that was beautifully written.. and how you put it into words.. when hermione and ron admit it to eachother.. the thoughts of reassurance to each other.. BEAUTIFUL!! and the first kiss... no tongue shoving down the throat.. Thankyou! you made it romantic and so simple.. what true love actually is.. and how harry wakes up in the end... oh my god... wow! i love this pic.. i cried when i read it.. its a perfect timing too.. like you didn't even make it how most fics are.. like post-war fics.. you made it at the best time.. right where we are right now.. your an incredible writer..im adding this to my faves.. and im gonna read your others if you have any more! keep writing! ur amazing!

I LOVED THIS FANFIC! It is the BEST fanfic i have read in ages! So many Ron/Hermione fics are so surreal and fluffy...they are usually all about how the romance takes place after the war, and how it all ends, but i love how you have set this in the middle... its so hard picture how Ron and Hermione will react when they are finally forced to face their fate (well for me anyway), but i think you have taken an extremely admirable stab at it. The tension and the anxiety between the three seems so realistic and believable... its almost like you are reading the book, reading about those last few hours before it all happens... i love how you have also not neglected the feirce friendship between the three... some of the thoughts running through each of the characters heads during this, whilst despairing, also prove and emphasize how strong the bond is between the three... how loyal and protective they are of one another.
Ok im rambling now.. sorry
but this is just great
keep on writing!

OH! That was wonderful! I wish I would have though of it! It's a beautiful story! Ron/Hermione stories are my favorite! You did a prefect perspective of Ron and Hermione. even Harry. I mean, I would understand that you captured Ron because, well, quite frankly I am a red-head and we all understand each other. You did GREAT! I hope you write more! PLEASE!
~FrecklesWeasley~

Very good. I really liked it. For the favourites.
Gidz
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That was beautiful! I loved it!

Just wonderful! I loved the conversation that lead to laughing and then to crying. Very powerful. Well Done.

I really enjoyed this one- its kinda depressing, yes, but its also really sweet.
Mostly though, I appreciate that this isn't one of those 'they're all living fantastically exciting and fulfilling lives whilst on the run from a demented evil madman' fics. (i'm guilty of writing them myself. sigh)
Very well written and engaging, so thanks!

I usually dont review oneshots but i though this was absolutly brillant! you captured their emotions so well i think and i really really liked it!! it seemed so realistic and so...well right lol. you have some real talent.

~FrannC~