Abt time Gwen Stacy popped up as a problem in Pete's

life!

"Omelets were out of question but waffles were a distinct possibility." Rather comical way of culminating the chapter! But a rather effective method for Harry to clear his mind abt his father!

Wow,incredibly intense chapter. I seriously had tears forming in my eyes when Harry was tearing over his bedroom. Yes it was that intense. The way you depicted Harry's madness, as if that's the only emotion he can counter with his relentless father. Oh and I notice that MJ has observed the attraction btwn Peter and Harry.

Quite a dramatic chapter. I really like it. This chapter really showed the contrast in Peter's and Harry's personalities.

The awkwardness btwn Flint and Pete was really hilarious. Pete is depicted as a soft guy- a foil to Rough Harry.

I squealed when Peter refers to Harry as "[his] Harry". It's so sweet and romantic! At first I thought Pete must not have been completely awake at that time. Oh and Harry approaching Murdock was quite unexpected. But believable.

Great interaction between Harry and Peter ESP the sexual tension Harry experienced when Peter was applying makeup on him.

The 'it's my shift line' is very funny and typical Spidey response. I like how you stayed true to the characters' personality so well. I like the appearance of Penny and Gwen albeit the latter being a tad assertive.

I guess Harry's contemplating abt his mutual feelings with Peter. And a very horrifying imagery with Gwen's situation.

Hmm I guess Venom placed the dress there for Gwen? Wow I just can't stop reading this. It's amazing! With flawless grammar and vocabulary!

Ah, the sexual tension starts happening. Can't wait till Peter and Harry get together! Oh and is that DareDevil at the end? I'm guessing so..can't wait to read more!

I like the part where Peter asked for Dr Connor's advice cos it makes sense since he was his teacher so it's be due time before Peter starts seeking advice frm his teacher once other ppl in his life cannot be approached since they were close to him and the root of the problem lies with them.

Sigh..MJ got really demanding in this chapter- 'her needs'

And her constant worrying. Poor Peter..having to put up with her. Anyway, Aunt May visiting Harry was quite a pleasant surprise.

I really love the conversation between Peter and Harry in this chapter. I think you nailed the interaction between them very well!

When Peter suggested the masks and Harry spun around, I was a bit apprehensive at first cos I thought Harry was showing a little hostility. Glad that he was joking! MJ doesn't do much in this chapter which I'm perfectly fine with cos I'd rather see the development btwn Peter and Harry (duh! I'm a slash fan!) and good to see Gwen Stacy at the end of the chapter. She must have felt really hurt after the whole jazz club scene in movie 3. Hope to hear from other characters soon! ESP Tony Stark!