Wow...
very Michael-ish...congrats!
Although...none of Baal's children were actually Lucifers...as he states...

OMG!
i love this! really!
you write very well. I think it's the best oneshot of angel sanctuary, ever! you MUST continu cause you're very good.


ps (sory for my english...it's my second language...)

There really need to be more fics like this out there. Sweet, descriptive, and that bitterness that Kaori-sensei seems to just love. Everybody's fucked as soon as they enter her mind, aren't they? Anyway, awesome fic, again. You should write more like it (I'd like to see those curtains).

Wow, I think u captured Michael's personality really well n here. I like it!

Aww... poor Micheal... awsome story it was good!

Ohh I rather enjoyed that. I adore Mika-chan to begin with and angry!Mika makes me squee softly. I liked how you described Lucifel through Michael's eyes and touched upon his bitterness towards women no doubt thanks to Baal. All in all, a great little fic, I do hope you'll write more in the future!

This is so very different than the way I have always pictured Micheal - and so much more probable - that I can't help but adore this one. I suppose he would be cold, and crazy, and have nervous ticks that could give the council heart attacts if angels were capable of getting those. Wait, are they? Hmm, I sense a plot bunny queitly hopping my way...

Clouds have rolled across and veiled the moon and stars, and a little part of him that’s tired of being furious at everything in general and a couple of things in particular thanks God quietly for giving it a night off.

This sentence just... aches. In a good way. Thanks for this one.

I never did get enough into Angel Sanctuary to know who this guy is, but that's okay. Your writing is descriptive enough that it's an enjoyable read even without the backstory. I like this crazy bastard. :-D