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SendMoreParamedics 2008-12-04 . chapter 1
*Drools* I love you...
happywanderer2 2008-10-22 . chapter 1
Hey;
I just came across this even though it has been up for a while. Nice...very nice. Hear the plopping sound as my drool hits my desk?

What will they do for an endgame?

HW2
Uzumaki-Hikari 2008-09-05 . chapter 1
Wow...who knew Hayate would get caught up in the moment...LOl. This was really good...and kinda funny...Sorry Genma...but you let go. ^^
Billie the fourth sage 2008-06-26 . chapter 1
At this moment in time I'm too breathless to form any coherent sentences xD So this will tell all-> O_O >D :3
Hakumei the Killer Panda 2008-02-10 . chapter 1
O//O Oh... Em... Eff... Gee... -cue massive nosebleed- THAT WAS THE HOTTEST FUCKING THING I HAVE EVER FUCKING READ!! Mm-mm! A delicious little Kotetsu/Izumo/Hayate sandwich! I HAVE GOT TO SHOW THIS TO KIR-CHAN! -faints-
Tenacious Fox 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Holy...crap...
. . .:in shock:
KoIzuHaya. . .
:dies of bloodloss:
I won't be able to think anything coherent for a while.
Nor look at these three the same way again.
grugonk 2007-12-15 . chapter 1
Oh my god. This was sweet. Hayate is just such a cute little uke. Man I was sweating bricks when Izumo pinned him to the bed and started humping the crap out of him. Hehehe. Serves Genma right that he missed that. Now how about some Izumo x Kotetsu smut where Kotetsu is beeing the uke? Anyway, I better get some tissues and tend to my nose before I die of blood-loss.
rowanashke 2007-11-19 . chapter 1
Wow. This has been up forever, and I just got around to reading it? Am I crazy? I guess. Damn hot! Very, very well written. The story flowed nicely, the sex just sizzled, and the characters were well developed (hard to do in a one shot!) Excellent writing. n.n
Mr.Frost-69 2007-10-14 . chapter 1
I Love It.
It's So Freaking Awesome!
And I Love That It's A Three-Some!
Leafystar 2007-10-06 . chapter 1
Oh...my...god. That was AMAZING!! Great job!! I especially liked Hayate in this. "Holy shit, Genma, I was kidding!" lmao. :D
Bankai-257 2007-09-04 . chapter 1
My god, that was awesome! I loved it! You are an amazing writer.
Anise 2007-08-16 . chapter 1
this was just so good and these three together was very sexy, they make a good threesome and i loved the end with Genma demanding they give Hayate back! :)
Luticiah 2007-07-15 . chapter 1
WOW, I thought that I was going to have a heart attack at the middle but by the end I think I died. WONDERFUL! Besides that I'm totally speechless, its stuck in my head forever.. *drools*
gilithramaloce 2007-07-08 . chapter 1
holy...crap. -drowns in a puddle of drool- That was simiply sextastic. Whowhee. Wonderful job.
Hatochan 2007-06-05 . chapter 1
this is just incredible! the story is HOT and the characterizatons are excellent! absolutely love it!
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