This is very well written, which is all too rare :/ I would love to see this continued, even though I'm guessing it is safe to assume that won't be happening. Oh well, thank you very much for the 15 great, long chapters you've given us :)

I've reviewed already, but I'll do it again. Because I want to, and because I need to (this fanfic deserves more reviews!!)
I just love your story. It's the perfect continuation for the real Death Note story!! (I know that it has been said already, and I know that I said it too before, but it's just too good.)
It's been more than six months since I finished reading chapter 15, but I'm still unable to stop thinking about it, making theories about what will happen... I can imagine the whole fanfic in manga style, in anime style, or even as a movie. And when I listen to the anime soundtrack (that is, most part of the day), I imagine some scenes from the fanfic with the music playing along ("Light's theme" when L and Light are walking in Mu, for example).

Oh, God. Now I sound like an obsessed, lunatic fangirl.

Anyway, I'm making a fanart for chapter 14 (when L and Light enter in the hut for the first time) and another for chapter 3 (the hands). When I finish them, I'll post them here.I'm really slow, though D:

Please, don't leave this story! If you have to change something in the story, do it, as long as it's still enjoyable.
... unless you're dead, or something.
Let's hope not... like someone said before, that would be a huge waste of talent.

Still waiting patiently :)

God that was so sad. I'm listening to moonlight sonata whilst whatever remains existed of Misa, were crushed ;_;
I never liked Misa, I thought she was sadistic, but I did always feel sorry for the women he manipulated; is this maybe Light/Raito learning to not be such a chauvanist? I hope so. You must have very strong and mature morals btw :)

this chappie was fantastic, I had to wipe a few tears when L called out for Watari (I cried over a ff, that has never happened before.) I love L :) And I think he's totally cute, I never thought he was ugly regardless of what the writers wanted. The rape part was...omg. I had to stop reading it for a moment. It was so shocking. May I also add that Misa is scaring the hell out of me. I'm actually a little scare of going to bed...

that was amazing. This fic is incredible. And on your authors note, yes, they are incredibly in character. I can't see how you will make them fall in love. But I can't wait.

Seriously, amazing work!

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This is, like, the most INTENSE ff I've ever read. I'm in total shock, omg, omg...

Don't worry about no one liking the fic, it's actually name dropped as a must read on TV Tropes.

Please keep writing it!!

You wrote the ending very well.

At first I was disappointed to see L, but you made this chapter very interesting. I'm glad Light isn't the only one who has to change.

Wow, this was amazing! No, more than amazing, but reading it for 2 days straight has zapped my vocabulary, so please accept the fact that you made me cackle maniacally at many a points. And I know you always worry about going OOC, but really you needn't worry, because you keep Raito and Ryuuzaki in character damn fine.

I noticed, woefully, that you haven't updates this in a LONG TIME. D: Please don't abandon this story, it's too beautiful to let hang here. I know it's been so long that you may have lost a lot of reviewers, and watchers even, but that shouldn't stop you from finishing such a great piece of literature.

Please please please come back to this. It's impossibly good. Your Raito and L are definitely different from the originals, but we see exactly how that happened. This is one of the greatest L/Raito fics I've read, and one of the rare good horror fics. Please finish it! You've stopped right in the middle of a cliffhanger!

*waves*
Not giving up :P This story is too amazing, I just can't forget about it (and I promised myself I would print it when it's over) so ...

Still here, still hoping :)

Thi is so beautiful. Your writing is just amazing, and admiring. I will enjoy reading the rest of this story.