Very cool

so... i read this [I'm actually familiar with Black Lagoon now, unlike when i first came across the story :)]


it's really good :D

but i don't really have anything more useful to say right now other than to hope that it doesn't take you too long to update again.

oh, and the chapter [i've forgotten which one, unfortunately] where Joker is talking about the paper sisters setting up a detective company? on at least one occasion you have 'defectives' instead of detectives :D

work much appreciated :)

good job. update soon

Sounds like things are going to get VERY interesting! Looks like Yomiko is going to have FOUR visitors in the very near future!

good job

I'm glad to see it updated! Hope to see more.

Now if I can only get my story updated...

i hope you continue soon

i'm glad you've updated

Lol, I've HAVE to see Black Lagoon! Revy and Balalaika are a hoot! ^^

nice chapter. update soon

Once again your work amazes me, jayell-sensei. Everything is well structured and you tell alot with very little. A talent you seem to have down to an art. Keep up the good work, I'll be keeping tabs on this latest story. I got to meet A. Amishi in person at ACEN this year and got a picture with him; he's a really nice guy. One of two of my fanfiction writing idols down, now all I gotta do is meet you! ^_^ Hope you'll update again soon, and I love the Nancy/Yomiko pairing!

-LF1080

i notice you didnt make Joker, Wendy and the rest of the british library the bad people in this fic, through from what i remember form the ROD manga, they were on the opposite side...im interested in how you would place them in the future, see ya next chapter then

I really hope this is going to be more of a Yomiko/Nenene fanfiction:3 Those are so cute to me.

Very nice beginning. I can't wait to read more from you!

First review!

This story has alot of potential, although i am curious as to who exactly this "Shane" is *wink wink*. Keep going! Although i'm a bigger fan of Yomiko/Nancy, the implied Yomiko/Nenene is good too. Will be looking forward to more of this from you, Jayell-sensei!

Ja ne!

-LowFlyer1080

P.S. - thank you for your review of my story The Diary of Rei, it meant alot to me!