 violentdreams-x 2009-09-27 . chapter 9That's the end?!? Aw...
I don't even know what happens to Kuki and wally! :( |
 truepinay13 2008-11-12 . chapter 9great story!
is there a sequel to this or no? |
 smaginn 2008-06-12 . chapter 9the end? NO
sequel? oretty pretty please with a cherry on top?
this story is just GREAT!
i love it.
its a pity nigel didnt come back, and that wally and kuki's crisis wasnt solved. i dont like 2.3 i love 3/4 and i wish that would actually happen.
it seems that abby like 1 but he likes traitor 362. btw is she a double agent , too? |
 cRaZyAsiAnGirL 2007-08-26 . chapter 9 I'm too lazy to sign in, but I think this fic deserves more reviews... =)
I have some criticisms first:
1) Watch your spelling. For example, "...she could see teen-ninja’s escaping " doesn't make much sense.
2) Also watch your punctuation. Some commas here and there make sentences clearer.
3) Hoagie's last name is "Gilligan," not "Gulligan." I needed to just inform you on that. =P
Here are the good things:
1) I like your writing style. I can't really describe it, but I do.
2) It's very faithful to the show. Everyone is pretty much in character.
3) You have a great taste in KND ships. XD
Congratulations. Your fic made me type just about the longest review I think I've ever made. Haha. |
 Afalstein 2007-07-09 . chapter 9 Kinda strange way to end, but pretty neat. The code names were a good idea. Watch your punctuation. |
 PanzerBun 2.0 2007-06-27 . chapter 8Awesome! Please update soon! Pretty Please! |
 DarkMike 15 2007-05-12 . chapter 6I LOVE YOU SERIES! Its so cool. keep em comming |
 random_reader 2007-05-09 . chapter 5 This is definitely one of the better written knd fics out there (despite the few spelling errors you had in your earlier chapters). The whole idea for this story is awesome, and you have a good grasp on the characters. Keep writing and update soon!
-rr |
 soxx 2007-05-09 . chapter 2wow awesome ideas! i like how the plot is going so far. great job keeping abby in character.
there's a few minor grammar mistakes. and i dont get the pun. but this story's the bomb. update sometime! |
 Afalstein 2007-05-09 . chapter 2Nice. The top-secret covert-ops style of things here is very tense, and Numbuhs 2 and 5 have a good interaction.
One thing, watch your spelling. Things like "we're not ALOUD to tell" throw the reader off. |