I read this fanfic in about 3 days. And I think it was really good. A nice perspective of the doomed Bravo team in their final moments. Especially Richard who was my favorite one. It peeves me that there isn't any fanfiction about him. Heck I'd even take the cheesy "What if he survived" story scenario. But no such luck there.

I'm surprised this story got hold of my attention so quickly. I've never considered myself enough of a RE fan to dabble in fan fiction. But you somehow managed to sway me in.

That and I just recently completed Umbrella Chronicles heh heh...

I'm two chapters in and it's already going very well! You've done a good job at putting life into otherwise lifeless characters like Kenneth and Richard. Descriptions are good and appropriate, never too much in places or too little.

A couple things I noticed were the mispelling of Spencer. It might have something to do with where you're from and your writing style, but since it's a name I felt that I should point it out.

I really think this is a perdectly complete novellisation of RE1 from Rebecca's view. A real book, not simply a fanfiction. And it's better again than Perry's pathos filled official novellisations!
What makes the story especially nice is the viewpoint not from strong chars like chris, but from Rebecca, a young girl.
Now, let's wait for chapter 6 of Sherry Birkin's story! ^__^

Awesome... simply awesome! :D

Evil, deceiving Wesker!
Nice ending!

I loved the bit about Wesker destroying the tapes!
Once again, great chapter!

Yay! I'm finally able to read this again and you, of course, don't disappoint. :)
Fantastic chapter!

Great chapter!
Although, this didn't quite fit to me.


"Rebecca tossed her obliterated gun to the side and went back to the other door handle, trying again to get it open. “Please, please! Come on!” She cried frightfully, turning to look back at the virus-born creature, which was shaking off its previous bewilderment. (Now it was even more pissed off then ever.)"

I don't know... That just seems a little off to me. Other than that, it was fantastic!

Excellent, as usual!
There are some grammatical mistakes in here, but nothing major.

Aw! :(
I like the way you ended it, though.
The little kiss was way cute!

"The exiting wound was like a firework display of blood, flesh and bone."

-- Fantastic description!

EPIC CHAPTER!
It's one of my favorites so far.

Oh!
The best cliffhanger you've done so far!

:D:D:D:D
Great chapter!
I don't know what else to say lol.

I like how you danced around the romance and didn't highlight it to the point that it was unrealistic and annoying.
Chris! :D:D:D:D
Fantastic chapter!

AWESOME cliffy!
Poor little Rebecca is just losing everyone.