 Quiet N Cryptic 2009-09-27 . chapter 1O.O
BEST.
ENDING.
/EVER/.
Cloud wins by a milestone! <3 |
 Mitsuru Aki 2008-06-14 . chapter 1Priceless. Absolutely priceless. lol! All their conversations should turn out this way, especially with that last line. It's very amusing to see them making fun of each other's angst, because otherwise it's just smothering. lol |
 LastTrojanNight 2008-03-08 . chapter 1LOL *evil evil evil grin* Very good Cloud, short and to the point!XD |
 dragonmisteress 2007-12-08 . chapter 1homg, this made me laugh for like, 5 minutes straight! that was hilarious, i was totally not expecting that! great job!^^ |
 Knit.pump 2007-09-24 . chapter 1LOL! You know what, the beginning bit reminded me of that bit in the last Kingdom Hearts Chronicles (the flash thing, not amazing but meh) and that bit when Sora is slowly sinking into the darkness and then goes "Hey..."
I loved the conversation between these two, both angsty dramaqueens vying for attention. Poor Cloud although I couldn't help but imagine him with rimless glasses, sitting in the recliner with a book in his hand, peeking over his glasses at a sulking Leon. I love the way Cloud was extremely sarcastic and Leon was all "Uh...my bad?"
Last line was a classic. |
 chicagoxpillowz 2007-07-19 . chapter 1xD!!
ohdear.
i couldn't even type without laughing.
xD!
justwow.
that was hilarious.
xDD!! |
 Scarlett Fear 2007-06-16 . chapter 1Dude, I could so see Cloud bashing in and ruining Leon's angst parade.lolXD
Gotta love that last line, *snickers* What you gonna do when the man who just murdered your angst asks you to take off your pants? You happily comply and get over the murder or your angst.XD
lol Funny and wonderful.XD |
 new moongirl 2007-06-12 . chapter 1hah! love the ending line! |
 Neko_Leon 2007-06-12 . chapter 1 XD XD (they are so angsty!) Cloud won poor Squalleh, ^^ So funneh! LeonxCloud=Best pairing everr!! |
 foolishpride 2007-06-04 . chapter 1Battle of the angsts...xD |
 jinkies-christ 2007-06-03 . chapter 1that was amazing...seriously, I'm laughing my ass off. Great ending, as well!! |
 Muffinizer 2007-05-19 . chapter 1Aherm. -clears throat-
I think your little story here has boosted up my LeonCloud/CloudLeon side.
First, I was like "Whoa, emo and depressing. Definitely Leon" at the beginning since, wtf, that was scary and all. But then Cloud's was scarier. :D I seriously think Cloud is... angstier [doesn't make sense, I know; shh] than Leon. D: But they're kinda equal, I guess. Both are depressing. Not like Sora who can skip through a field of blood-seeking Heartless with a shining, bright smile on his face.
Yeah.
"What did you want again?"
"For you to shut up, lock the door, and take off your pants." GOD, I laughed out loud when I read that. Cloud's impatient now, isn't he? x3
-Muffinizer boing-boing~ |
 Reaper Nanashi 2007-05-11 . chapter 1Bwarharhar! They're both such children! I can imagine them having that argument on a day when they were both in a half-way decent mood. The last line was definitely the best, though. X9
--RN (LS) |
 Soul Writer Of Dark Truth 2007-05-09 . chapter 1HAHA nice. I love Cloud's rant. And the last line. Oh yes, the last line! XD |
 WhenSpeechless-Write.xo 2007-05-09 . chapter 1lmfao awesome totallii awesome had me in stitches all the way through! Keep it up id love to hear from ya
may your heart shine brightly
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