It's Provost Marshal, not Provo...

And so seth is punished LOL that'll teach him. *snicker*

Aww milo..

!Q!

Seth you are a turd... LOL... nice plot twist

a woman's tears are the most powerful weapon know to mankind... the hydrogen bomb... nothing - a mere fly swatter...

like magnets! very much so!

HA! I never would of thought to pair George with Jareth!

Oberon sighed too. "Poor Sarah, in love with the Goblin King." He looked at the woman child, not quite human, not quite Fae, lying on her bed. "Poor child."

not quite human huh?

well this one starts quite different!

And once again I am let speechless my dear, your stories are delightful and magical at the same time.. I am very glad to have read some of your most wonderful stories this week.. Hope that you write a few more to keep me amazed... And remember talent like your is blessed from the fates...

Maria Severino

I have read this story 3 or 4 times since I first reveiwed it. And it never fails to entertain me. Is it finished? You don't have a 'complete' designation on it, but it could be finished with the last chapter. Jareth can be so childish at times, ah, but so cam most adult mortals...

i really like the way you end your stories...they feel finished but you always get the sense that there is more than what is written. so thank you!

much hugs

lizzie hopscotch

::happy little sigh:: I love it _ ::rushes off to bed::

Another great tale from the kings scribe. Lovely, fasinating, captivating. I've enjoyed all of them I have read.