Very true; even typically-happy characters like MOMO deserve to feel hopeless from time to time. Although MOMO isn't usually depicted this angsty in the canon, you did a great job giving her personality a 180-degree spin in a very believable way. Considering the situation she undergoes, I think MOMO has every right to fall into despair! There's also a great mix of canon dialogue and "new" dialogue, making this story fit in well with Episode I. Truthfully, I wouldn't mind a sequel to this, perhaps about MOMO's feelings when Albedo finally does get the Y-Data in Episode II. But as it stands, this is a great and more original MOMO story.

c-c-c-complete!? aw well, i won't force u to right more, anyways, everything u did, 1,0,0/5, lol, yes, it was that good, it's like taking that cutsceen, and adding to it to let everyone knew what happened, and i like fanfics like that, fillers, well, i'm favoritng ur fanfic, AWESOME JOB (and thanx for all the albedo ^_^)

.__. Wow. This story was just...wow. I've never really found a really good angsty story with Momo as the main character, in all honesty I think a lot could be done with that because of the things that have happened in her life...but damn this one completely went over my expectations. It was beautifully written in a way I cannot possibly describe, and you made it to where each character was in character, which is amazing to do in an angst shot with a usually cheery character. So kudos to you on this wonderful story! ^^ I hope to see more like this from you, 'cause I'm kind of a fan of angst myself, and Momo's my favorite character from the game ^^

Hm. Don't have much to say on this fic, other than I liked it. :)

Poor MOMO. Good story! Sad, but that's good anyways, since I'm drawn to angsty stories.