Not bad, not bad at all. Although, there was some grammar and spelling mistakes in there, or just simple mistakes. One of them was using 'it' instead of 'if'.

Other than that, All good!

Ee cliffhanger! Now that Sheik also know, I'm anxious to see what will happen next! And I'm curious about this new character who picked up Link. I hope you update soon! Man, Link and Sheik's journey to be together is so rough.

I could swear I left a review when I read your update when it first came out! Alas. When I came to check to see if you updated (becase sometimes my email alert does not work properly like it should) I noticed that I did not leave a review!

So here it is! =]

I am so happy/upset/on-edge after reading your update! Happy because you did not forget about this lovely, unique plot line. Upset because of the cliff hanger! And, lastly, on edge because...Just. WOW. I cannot WAIT to see how Link manages to get herself outta this one! Or better yet what she finds out from this...'tribe' of people I suppose?

I hope that the next update and the rest of the fic is easier to write for you! Take your time. no rush. I believe everyone understands how hetic and demanding life can get sometimes. =]

Glad to see that you're still writing. Good luck!

We missed you Loui!

Oh, finally things are begining to heat up! Yay!

Oh tension. This chapter was great, i like the way you ended it and, dammit, write lots more soon. please -begs-

Ah, it is so good to see that you finally updated.
I'm very curious as to who the group was. A shadow folk? Very curious...

I'm sorry I hadn't reviewed in a long time!

I hope you make Sheik go after her. PLease!

Breathe, dude, breathe. No worries. When a story is good, you savor the time it takes to read. You learn patience. (I certainly had to!) It's good. Take your time.

I totally understand where you are coming from with the whole "school is taking over my life" aspect but this update was pretty much fantastic. =]]

uh-oh. everyone is starting to find out that there is something is up with Link and her soul. I can't wait until she finally figures out what happened to her in the last battle with Ganon.

Hmm...interesting chapter, I like it! I hope you update soon!

Looks like another good story. I'mm glad to see that you still have the same characters from the previous ones (Gimel, Kratos, Chiyo, etc.) I'm looking forward to when you can finish writing this (but don't rush it, your work so far has been great).
As always, good luck and keep writing.

I loved this chapter. It went through every character, and how they were developing and I liked how you did it.

Ooh... shadow Tribe. I think i who they are! Neheehee...

Great job!

S.S.

I'm so sorry! I read your other storys of 'The Heroine' and I didn't review! (Sobs and hides in a corner)but unfortunatly, I wasn't able to login on my account 'cause of some problem with the computer. So I decided to review your new story. And I'd say that it's AWSOME! Although, the part with Link and Sheik in bed together doing... you know what(ahg! I can't even say the word 'cause it grosses me out!) well, that kind of creeped me out in a strange way, but apart from that, those three chapters(yes, I read them all at once) were great!! Keep up the good work!!

yay! a update!

I almost thought you had left this fic behind. =]]

Link can't keep her secret to herself much longer before everyone will know! Lovely update. Can't wait for more.