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whispers of the night
2010-01-02 . chapter 1
I liked this story. One thing, though.

Malfoy lifted his wand and cast a quick spell that shot toward the darkened domicile. “Wards. I’ll know if he tries to sneak out.” Malfoy sighed.

If they are both Aurors, would Draco have to tell Harry what spell he was casting? Maybe you should have clarified the spell in a different way.
B.D. Gerretson
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
absolutely adorable!!
Bery
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
I'm from germany, so I have to say first: This story was easy but so cute to read! I really love it. Now, I'm going to read your other storys...
purplerawr
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
I really love every story I read by you, don't I? :P And this one is no exception, though it is exceptional. I liked the simplicity of it, and when Draco said it was his birthday my heart actually panged, it was sad D: but at least he got a few presents :)

- purplerawr
luukaa
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Sweet as chocolate ;)
Doni
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Sweet and sexy.
Nush-Mish
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Very, very sweet. And the darkness and rain, with their kissing outside under a tiny umbrella, is such a wonderfully evocative thought. I loved this. ;)

~nush
Annie
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
aaw that was cute =P but with a lemon it would of been better ;D! haha
Nenne
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
Even with a soaking wet Draco this was hot.
Midnight Mourner
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
Stupid Minister. What an ** to send Draco on his birthday. However, it makes everyone else happy as Draco got the best birthday present he could ask for. Harry. xDD. I knew Harry was going to end up licking the chocolate away when Draco smeared it on his cheek. What writer wouldn’t do that if they gave themselves the chance lmao. Happy Birthday Draco! I loved this piece!

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥
K.V. Cake
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
E, it's perfect: so cute, but not sappy. I love how you've made Draco a bit morose and vulnerable, but you've managed not to change his character, because we can still tell it's our good ol' Malfoy!

Just enough to keep us begging for more. You authors and your teasing one-shots!
angeldiane
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Very good. I think I'll have to start eating chocolate whenever it rains now. Something about the two seems to go so well together after this story. The interaction between Draco and Harry were just perfect. I liked how you gave Draco just enough sarcasm allowing to keep him charming and witty. Please continue writing! ^-^
AmethystSight
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
CUTE X
lovefan81
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
I can't believe I've never read that story. It's great. I've never read a fic with Draco as an Auror but somehow I like the idea.

Great story!
Gomenace
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
That was quite .. well, sort of hot. Spoiled!Draco is adorable! *sigh* They are so perfect together.
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