 whispers of the night 2010-01-02 . chapter 1I liked this story. One thing, though.
Malfoy lifted his wand and cast a quick spell that shot toward the darkened domicile. “Wards. I’ll know if he tries to sneak out.” Malfoy sighed.
If they are both Aurors, would Draco have to tell Harry what spell he was casting? Maybe you should have clarified the spell in a different way. |
 B.D. Gerretson 2009-11-28 . chapter 1absolutely adorable!! |
 Bery 2009-11-16 . chapter 1I'm from germany, so I have to say first: This story was easy but so cute to read! I really love it. Now, I'm going to read your other storys... |
 purplerawr 2009-11-14 . chapter 1I really love every story I read by you, don't I? :P And this one is no exception, though it is exceptional. I liked the simplicity of it, and when Draco said it was his birthday my heart actually panged, it was sad D: but at least he got a few presents :)
- purplerawr |
 luukaa 2009-11-03 . chapter 1Sweet as chocolate ;) |
 Doni 2009-11-03 . chapter 1Sweet and sexy. |
 Nush-Mish 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Very, very sweet. And the darkness and rain, with their kissing outside under a tiny umbrella, is such a wonderfully evocative thought. I loved this. ;)
~nush |
 Annie 2009-10-21 . chapter 1 aaw that was cute =P but with a lemon it would of been better ;D! haha |
 Nenne 2009-10-18 . chapter 1Even with a soaking wet Draco this was hot. |
 Midnight Mourner 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Stupid Minister. What an ** to send Draco on his birthday. However, it makes everyone else happy as Draco got the best birthday present he could ask for. Harry. xDD. I knew Harry was going to end up licking the chocolate away when Draco smeared it on his cheek. What writer wouldn’t do that if they gave themselves the chance lmao. Happy Birthday Draco! I loved this piece!
♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥ |
 K.V. Cake 2009-07-18 . chapter 1E, it's perfect: so cute, but not sappy. I love how you've made Draco a bit morose and vulnerable, but you've managed not to change his character, because we can still tell it's our good ol' Malfoy!
Just enough to keep us begging for more. You authors and your teasing one-shots! |
 angeldiane 2009-07-14 . chapter 1Very good. I think I'll have to start eating chocolate whenever it rains now. Something about the two seems to go so well together after this story. The interaction between Draco and Harry were just perfect. I liked how you gave Draco just enough sarcasm allowing to keep him charming and witty. Please continue writing! ^-^ |
 AmethystSight 2009-07-07 . chapter 1CUTE X |
 lovefan81 2009-07-05 . chapter 1I can't believe I've never read that story. It's great. I've never read a fic with Draco as an Auror but somehow I like the idea.
Great story! |
 Gomenace 2009-06-06 . chapter 1That was quite .. well, sort of hot. Spoiled!Draco is adorable! *sigh* They are so perfect together. |