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Reviews For: To Sleep, Perchance

gorengal
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abuseFirst time I read this I teared up over Bobby's interaction with his mother. I love the last line about Dickens advising bagels with the coffee.
The Confused One
2007-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is good. Poor Bobby. Great work. :) I really liked this.
deliriousdancer
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseThis was wonderful. I could hear Bobby reading to his mother to help calm her down. Its a good thing he has a good memory. I couldnt remember a present I got when I was four years old. I really liked the texting back and forth with Eames.
moonstone2148
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseLoving the by play here - more soon? GG
Lactuca
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseThis was so great. Seriously. I loved the details of Bobby getting home and trying to wind down from hanging his coat to cutting his pear. I loved him watching the city and loving it. I loved the text messages, funny and insightful. I loved his cycling thoughts and counting sheep not working. I loved him talking his mother down and just everything. Such a brilliant little one shot!

The only thing I didn't like was him calling his mother "Ma", but I think that's because in my head that is always said with a West Country accent...
Ruby Rosetta Red
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseReally enjoyed this. Very descriptive, it drew me in and kept me reading. I'll check out the poetry recommendation too! thanks for that! :)
Patcat
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseWell, I'm a sucker for Dickens and Coleridge, but this story had much more. Very well done.
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