Palmer4President 2008-02-05 . chapter 8This chapter was so unbelievably adorable! I loved it! Bill was so cute with his proposal at midnight and his nerves. I just don't know what to say other than this was so incredibly awesome. Love it! |
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-05 . chapter 8My reaction to your story:
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! THIS WAS SO CUTE! *squeal*
At the start of this chapter I was in absolute hysterics!! I love how you put so many hilarious bits into your story, so subtly too!! Beautifully written and such a CUTE proposal! ;)
How could I ever beat that?! Haha
twentyfour.mad Mak |
Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2008-02-04 . chapter 8AWAW! Now that's how you end a day and go to bed!! lol. ^_^
LOVE IT!! Better than my 20 long months proposal, everyone writes these really good proposals and mine sucked! haha.
Well Night!
~Huddyalways♥ |
Palmer4President 2008-02-04 . chapter 7Aw, I loved this take5! It was adorable! I was going to go through and tell you my favorite lines (because there were quite a few good ones in there), but there are so many, that I might as well just say I loved the whole thing! Awesome job, and I can't wait for more, both from this and from Have Faith! |
Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2008-02-04 . chapter 7Aw, Sarcasism! My fave! lol.
Supercute Chapter! Love the ending, but one line made me laugh...
"and whether or not Vince and Jennifer really are a couple."
LOL. Thats funny! I promise my update is coming.
Well I thought I'd point out missy, that I saw on your Palmer review that you don't think me and Mak are sane? *Glares* As if, we are the sanest people you know, and that is a fact. *Looks around* Fine maybe not the sanest but...oh well I'll never get away with that one! lol.
~Huddyalways♥ |
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 7Haha I absolutely loved this. I'm sorry for all those reviews!! ;) Great chapter!! :) Can't wait for your other updates then!! ;)
twentyfour.mad Mak |
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 5I do believe this is the last review I need to review for now!! You must be going hooray, because this is the last message saying that a review has appeared... well for now it is ;)!!
You're an excellent writer take5 I hope you do continue your wonderful writing!! ;)
Maybe you'll even be a part time writer after Uni or something?! Or you could be whatever you've planned to be after Uni, and just keep writing at or wherever!! ;)
Bill and Karen live on forever, in our hearts they do anyway!!
twentyfour.mad Mak ;) |
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 4Oh, how cute!! :) I really don't know why I hadn't reviewed your chapters earlier!! :( But now I have!! Some of this chapter was poetic, very beautiful indeed.
twentyfour.mad |
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 3I didn't review this earlier why? :( This chapter is so cute!! :) I love how descriptive your writing has gotten compared to your first story, not saying your first story was bad or anything, what I mean is that you have gotten so much better!! :) Nice Job!!
twentyfour.mad Mak |
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 1OMG!! I remember reading this at school, I can't believe I didn't review! Well I love this chapter and I remember quite well I loved it the first time I read this. ;)
twentyfour.mad Mak |
hollowpoet 2007-06-19 . chapter 6Love this, please keep writing!! |
kitcat19us 2007-06-11 . chapter 6Yeah, Bill and Karen are getting married. |
kitcat19us 2007-06-11 . chapter 3I love this chapter a lot. |
laura sedai 2007-06-11 . chapter 6Aw! I like Karen's family! |
twentyfour.mad 2007-06-10 . chapter 6Oh this is so sweet! Keep writing can't wait for more. |