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Palmer4President 2008-02-05 . chapter 8
This chapter was so unbelievably adorable! I loved it! Bill was so cute with his proposal at midnight and his nerves. I just don't know what to say other than this was so incredibly awesome. Love it!
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-05 . chapter 8
My reaction to your story:
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! THIS WAS SO CUTE! *squeal*

At the start of this chapter I was in absolute hysterics!! I love how you put so many hilarious bits into your story, so subtly too!! Beautifully written and such a CUTE proposal! ;)
How could I ever beat that?! Haha

twentyfour.mad Mak
Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2008-02-04 . chapter 8
AWAW! Now that's how you end a day and go to bed!! lol. ^_^

LOVE IT!! Better than my 20 long months proposal, everyone writes these really good proposals and mine sucked! haha.

Well Night!

~Huddyalways♥
Palmer4President 2008-02-04 . chapter 7
Aw, I loved this take5! It was adorable! I was going to go through and tell you my favorite lines (because there were quite a few good ones in there), but there are so many, that I might as well just say I loved the whole thing! Awesome job, and I can't wait for more, both from this and from Have Faith!
Huddyalways-24-BK-MA 2008-02-04 . chapter 7
Aw, Sarcasism! My fave! lol.
Supercute Chapter! Love the ending, but one line made me laugh...
"and whether or not Vince and Jennifer really are a couple."
LOL. Thats funny! I promise my update is coming.

Well I thought I'd point out missy, that I saw on your Palmer review that you don't think me and Mak are sane? *Glares* As if, we are the sanest people you know, and that is a fact. *Looks around* Fine maybe not the sanest but...oh well I'll never get away with that one! lol.

~Huddyalways♥
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 7
Haha I absolutely loved this. I'm sorry for all those reviews!! ;) Great chapter!! :) Can't wait for your other updates then!! ;)

twentyfour.mad Mak
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 5
I do believe this is the last review I need to review for now!! You must be going hooray, because this is the last message saying that a review has appeared... well for now it is ;)!!
You're an excellent writer take5 I hope you do continue your wonderful writing!! ;)
Maybe you'll even be a part time writer after Uni or something?! Or you could be whatever you've planned to be after Uni, and just keep writing at or wherever!! ;)
Bill and Karen live on forever, in our hearts they do anyway!!

twentyfour.mad Mak ;)
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 4
Oh, how cute!! :) I really don't know why I hadn't reviewed your chapters earlier!! :( But now I have!! Some of this chapter was poetic, very beautiful indeed.

twentyfour.mad
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 3
I didn't review this earlier why? :( This chapter is so cute!! :) I love how descriptive your writing has gotten compared to your first story, not saying your first story was bad or anything, what I mean is that you have gotten so much better!! :) Nice Job!!

twentyfour.mad Mak
twentyfour.mad 2008-02-03 . chapter 1
OMG!! I remember reading this at school, I can't believe I didn't review! Well I love this chapter and I remember quite well I loved it the first time I read this. ;)

twentyfour.mad Mak
hollowpoet 2007-06-19 . chapter 6
Love this, please keep writing!!
kitcat19us 2007-06-11 . chapter 6
Yeah, Bill and Karen are getting married.
kitcat19us 2007-06-11 . chapter 3
I love this chapter a lot.
laura sedai 2007-06-11 . chapter 6
Aw! I like Karen's family!
twentyfour.mad 2007-06-10 . chapter 6
Oh this is so sweet! Keep writing can't wait for more.
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