U SHOULD TOTALLY KEEP WRITING! in fact, u should write a sequel of this.

I think its good,

you got it right (i guess) *looks around*

and YES! you should continue writing

I loved this short story, it's really funny just thinking how Mulder would have been thinking Scully's thoughts. Heehee. I hope you continue writing more stories, I'll be looking forward to reading them!

Keep going with this. It seems like you're on the right track and know what you're talking about. I'm interested to see what would happen next...

loved it...

This sounds great. Please continue it.

Keep Writing! I love introspective first-time stories. Especially those in which the perspective jumps back and forth between the two characters. I enjoy the experience of seeing the events unfold between them, and the differences in the perception of those same events between the two characters.

Good Luck!

there's gonna be more right? this is too good not write a sequel for! :)

No man on earth thinks like that... j/k. Nice little thought monlouge, but nothing really revolutionary. Still, nice piece, and you acheived what you were going for, which is the best thing you can do. Good job.

hay that was cute love do it

Yeah...I think you got it right. Keep writing dude.

I thought it was great! Tell about the date! :) MORE, MORE, MORE! Thanks, I'll definitely read the rest. -Tracy (..)

Frankly i like it don't get me wrong but Mulder should have fell in the... i don't wanna give it away to anyone. But it should've happened to Mulder and heard what Scully thought. You gotta write that! If ya don't want to tell me and I'll write it! Jolly Good!

cute, nice POV.

definitely keep writing i like your style and i think it's incomplete where you stopped