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| all the glitters 2007-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseLovely. I really DID enjoy it. Sorry about not seeing it before, fanfic was being really annoying. I loved the end about Danny being there for her. It just emphasizes what a beautiful, trusting and co-dependent relationship they have. The way you described their feelings seemed so real and genuine; you captured it beautifully. Love ya, Aliff! You're an inspiration, honey! Delia/ kissmesweet. |
| oddie33325 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abusei want more i love it great job |
| PintSizeGenius 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAliff, this is beautiful! I gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling inside, it made my day! Great job, and i would love it if you did a sequel too! Great job! PSG x |
| JennCorinthos 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseLoved this... Just as much as I loved the other one... Hope there is a sequel... Love your stories... Now I can not get Danny on horse out of my mind... JENNIFER |
| crashdownmontana 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseDarling you know I loved it! My P.I.C./ Hot Blonde! And you know I want "For Him" but then again you've known that for a while LOL!! TTYL HUN! Brilliant as usual!! |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. and I want the sequel. so pretty please write it :) I love how you describe their feelings for each other, you can practically feel it through the words |
| HillHarperHOT 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseYou did a wonderful job. I can't wait to read the sequel. |
| Angel-of-vampires 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abusewow... that was so beautiful. *sigh* i can't wait for the sequel that you mentioned. please write it soon. |
| AnimeMaster13333 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat as always. |
| Murgy31 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI think you should definately continue the story with a sequel. I loved this story, and I would love to see them handle his struggles together. Great job! You are very talented. Do you have an idea for a title yet? |
| pineylife 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I really enjoyed it. I would like to read a sequel. It would be really cool to read :) |
| daytimedrama 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI love the changes you made. I like that you went deeper into the things that they still have to work on. Personally I would love if you made this into a multichapter fic. |
| dl-shipper34 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseAliff hun this is absolutely fantastic! You captured the true spirit of Danny and Lindsay's relationship perfectly. Love the way you expressed their emotions and feelings. Well done :) |
| montana78 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abusethis is brilliantly written. i read the first version but this in a oneshot is fantastic. it shows the importance of them being able to trust each other and how deep their feelings run. definitely needs a sequel,maybe another oneshot? can't wait to read it. :-) |