That story was goin BRILLIANTLY u say u don hav ani ideas u could write about dat king triein to kill kori and rachel. keep it up plz!

how did this dominque person come up?
I was really confused...
Could you explain the thing to me? Please?

o mysterious person, i likey! so, whats gonna happen now that they know their identities...hm :P

lol! that was quite an interesting chappie. i hope you update soon because you left it at another cliff hanger! grr!
best wishes

0sam

lol. two million dollars? i don't really see a multi billionaire suddenly giving away that kind of money that he worked hard for, but it's understandable in this sort of story. lucky school *pouts* wish my school was given two million dollards.

-wait-

that would be really bad. then the head of the school would be able to buy -another- house in -another- state. *grumbles* they have two bank books and are stashing away all that extra money. evil! the heads of the school are evil i tell you! *ahem* sorry, just had to get that out. i go to a private school so... yeah... long story.

anyways, i have one more chapter to read and then it's finished! *wa* so then i can tell you to update or write more or whatever.

best wishes

-sam

nice. you added a twist- kory + richard are superheroes. ^.^ luv it.

best wishes

0sam

well, to start, i would have to say that the title and summary are really vauge and it is sort of hard to find it when searching for random stories. so, if you want to catch more attention, you could spice up your summary a bit.

but, besides that *shrug* nice start. good intro, not too long and not too short, and not a very *wow* beginning that really freaks you out. just plain and simple. yah know? some people just want a story like that sometimes. nothin' wrong with it.

so, i can't wait to read more and if you haven't finished this story, then: update soon! because i really like it!

best wishes

-sam

Mr Wilson! Slade!
I love it! Slade's the principal!
I LOVE THAT IDEA! CONTINUE THE STORY! PLEASE COUNT THIS REVIEW AS LIKE TWELVE REVIEWS!
PLEASE UPDATE!

Finally! I've been waiting for this chapter to come up Dom :)
Great update! So much longer, I Love it!
n_n meow! Cat fight, lols. I hate Kitten, shes a snob.
Can't wait for chapter 5 :3

HEY! How could you have ended it like that? You have to, have to, HAVE TO update real soon please!

dude, wats with kitten and her bitting? wonder wats the appointment...
i think that in the next chapter or the next two, they should kno that hes robin and shes starfire

cool chapter. now, i want more!
mwhahahaha!
Weird hyper moment in my histoy...one that i'm not very proud of...

Holy crap, Bruce Wayne must be really rich if he's donating 2 million dollars to a school carnival u_U
True, It is longer, and I really love the humor you put into the chapter.
But one question: In the actual Teen Titan's series, is Bruce Wayne really Robin's father? o.o;; (Cause i'm not up to date, remember? xD)
And I think it'd be better if you stick to using one name of the titans because when you call Robin, Richard, I get confused and think that they're two different people =/
Well anyways, nice chapter. Hope you update soon
(And Hope your having fun in DC)

Another sweet chapter! It was a little short, but the content was worth reading x]
:o I wonder if in the next chapter Robin catches her from her fall...(Thank god theres a chapter 3 (: )
Oh, and I think there should've been a comma in this sentence:

Kori went up into her room after dinner and did her homework. She kept running her hand through her hair(COMMA)she was **.

Neat first chapter, Domie. (Yeesh, It's Tiff, Bwahaha!)
Although I'm currently not up to date on the Teen Titan's series (since my T.V is broken n_n) but, this was really good.
I'm also taking a guess that Richard is Robins actually name and Rachel and Gar(field) is Raven and Beastboy? o.o;;
Keep up the nice work!
And Maybe you can make Kori and Richard a couple ^.~