Short and sweet. I really liked this.

It didn't have your usual air to it, but departure from normality, "difference" for lack of a better term, is good sometimes. In this case, it was better than good. This was unadulterated awesomeness.

Seriously, this rocked.

real nice fic...at first i saw the title harmonica ad thought it would be a mimato but i would have not guess it was a takari but heck i love takari very much as well.

Awsome! Never thought T.K would play the harmonica though... but hey theres a first for everything... Keep up the good work... _

Flying toast is cool. I thought it was a Mimato, but I'm glad I opted to read it anyway. Hey! This review is too... normal. I need sugar. Where's my sugar? Ah! TK/Kari forever! *Sugar is good* Ah, sweet salvation.

It was sweet and all, but who did he miss? Yama and the others? It doesn't matter, really.

can i send the flying toast? :) i really liked this a lot, so write more!

well I'm glad it wasn't mimi and matt! sorato foreva! (and takari)

Great storie. I have to say it's one of the best i've ever read.

Wow... that was good,

I REALLY thought that was mimi and matt, but when you said. "Her The wind blew her hair

lightly, sweeping it into her eyes as he leaned against the lone palm

tree. Her faithful friend laid curled up like a puppy at her side." and I was like "Hey, Palmon does not have fur" but... twas good

flying toast? where on earth did ya come up with that? stick to the point dani. the story. oh yeah, DANI LIKE!

Great story! At first, I thought it was Mimato! Anyway great job!

wow,had me fooled...you wrote a tremendous fic here,love how it turned out to be Takari!...Raine

ARTANIS: MATT AND KARI? EEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! NOW I SOUND LIKE A GIRL! NOT THAT THAT IS BAD, ITS JUST WEIRD. GREAT JOB! I DIDNT READ THIS FOR A LONG TIME SINCE I THOUGHT THIS WAS SORATO. TAKARI AND TAIORA FOREVER! YEAH! AW CRAP, MY BEST FRIEND IS GONNA KILL ME CAUSE I TYPED THIS ON OUR FILE WITHOUT HIS PERMMISION! :TRIES TO RUN TO CHINA SCREAMING "AHHHHH! ELBERT IS GONNA KILL ME!::

clever honey, clever

that was cute! I loved it! T.K. and Kari are such a cute couple!