Just read this story. Liked it for illustrative detail. Looking forward to more from the author.

Wow... hot! Very good work! Love it! (o-o)

You write the best Tana/Marisa fanfics ever!

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Kyaa! Loved it! -heart eyes-

Love the pairing! You totally nailed Marisa's character. btw this doesn't suck I think I've read it at least ten times, and it just keeps getting better.

This is a good story, I like the pairing. You're a really good author, and you can write quite a few different genres, so I hope by the time I get to your current stories, you stop saying you suck.

It wasn't as descriptive as one might hope, but i liked it.

(P.S. It has been a very long time since i have played fire emblem, so, if you can, please relay the positions and importance to the story these two had, thanks)

Crow

Well... Never thought I'd find a decent err... FE:SS lemon. I won't call you a perv since it's just human nature. Also, Tana and Marisa did have a support conversation with each other so I can see where you're going. Like I said before, it's human nature, though I'm afraid of posting my own. [shudders at what he has written] I'll wait until I've done a few more non-lemon fanfict of oneshots and yuris. [shudders at wicked internal mind]

I read it, enjoyed it, nothing to say, really, keep up the good work!

lol

I loved it. So awesome! XD

Tana, Marisa...hm...weird pairing but u pulled it off well em!

Hehehe, a good fic... And it proves you can have an "action" scene without going too much into the details...

i like it

And I'm not the one to flame anyone for Shojo ai anyway XD