That was sweet~ I liked the shackles/freckles thing going on, especially the 'coffee wisps' and 'sunny eyes' descriptions... so accurate. :D You have a flair for lyrical writing too!

Nicely done.

aw! this is a really fluffy fic, death by college! :P
i like the description of kate, it's very cute and the whole poem was funny about her freckles! tee hee.

Aw! Such a cute fluff poem :D

Nice job, very interesting. Thanks so much for the poem and teh nod at mine! *gives death. a virtual hug* Keep writing and I'll have a Kate/Mars missing moment up soon if I can! :D