YAAY AIKKA FAN FIC!^_^ Aikka is one of my favorites characters of Oban and I’m glad to find good stories about him. I like your idea of writing the whole story of oban from Aikka’s point of view. There are some well written stories about scenes of oban from Aikka’s point of view, but usually the authors change the original story. You’re the first author I’ve found to stick with the original story. You also make it very realistic by presenting more races and pay attention to characters that we just saw in the series. When I first saw Lio in the series I just thought she looks cool, nothing more. Now I’m very curious what would happen to her, if she is a good or bad character.
Although I am a huge Mokka fan I’m glad that you kept the original storyline and didn’t make them fall in love at the first sight. It makes everything more realistic because normal people don’t fall in love at first sight. And it would make their future relationship more profound. Relationship which I hope would happen. I’m still frustrated by the way the series ended but it’s your choice whether you keep that ** ending or not.
Keep up the good work!

Ugg I haven't seen Oban in ages. I really love this show and Aikka's point of view is nice to see. I can't wait for the next chapter update soon!

We! :3Love the character you added, hope you update soon!

Hey, this is FlameoZutara. YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY NAO! XD I love the way you write Aikka, it fits him so perfectly, and his encounter with Molly was so cute! Please write more soon! *cuddles Takai plushie with teary puppy dog eyes*

This is pretty good, I hope u update soon!

im liking this story please write more for this story soon. i love molly/aikka storys

great story i like it alot just wondering when you gonna finish it

Your stories inspire me to keep writing...there are times when I want to give up...but then...not..

MORE! Nah I know your working double time on Aftermath so this story will have to wait a while..so it looks.

No you didn't overkill the race part..perfect!!

Until Next time!!

Guess who!! Hehe..

I wasn't aware you created another OSR story, though as soon as I saw the story...immediately jumped...only halfway through it...and lets just say, I'M ALREADY IN LOVE WITH IT!

YAY! this is fun, i had kinda wanted to see the series from Aikka-sama's point of veiw. Good work, to. i'm sick of people who are under the very mistaken impression they can write, so your story is refreshing. As a suggestion, I think it would be funny to have Aikka race against Paradice. They're polar opposites, so it would be pretty amusing if they got into a verbal smack-down. But I guess Aikka isn't that kind of person? Still, Paradice can get pretty annoying. . . ahh, this is keeping me distracted until the OSR DS game comes out, so that's good. one more thing: just out of curiosity, are people really trying to sue you?! i shudder at the thought of another innocent plushie losing it's stuffing to some low-life.

Love the story! Update ASAP!

Very good so far! I like the whole confrontation scene between Aikka and Eva, I always wondered what he was thinking. And the descriptions of the Nourasian pit is great. As for Satis, I would figure he would be fun to write.

aw D: no Naurasian bunny...COOKIE!! -grabs cookie- thank coo :) Aikka saw it explode BOOM! -shifty eyes-...hehe..i think i better go alert mom about the oven exploding...well great chapter! Hope you get to update sometime soon...stupid oven...

nyah XP
its still the same just too damn lazy to go through the complicated things to sign in but anywayz
*cathes plushie* YAY!
you finally updated!!
me love this chapter as well as Aikka *shifts eyes*
maybe this time I'll find out what Aikka was going to do in the rain with Molly.
I remembered that favor I was going to ask u!
^.^
update soon!

Haha, yeah, Satis is awesome. I had just noticed that myself. XD

Try to update as quick as you can, OK? Good. While you're working on this excellent story, I'll work on watching all the episodes of this show on youtube, and in the correct order, so nothing gets spoiled for me. =)